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Time Alone
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Time Alone |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Sometimes I love to wander all alone With time on my hands and freedom to roam. Listening to the rustling of the leaves That scatter around in the gentle breeze. Relaxing under a tree in the shade. Watching the formations the clouds have made. These peaceful feelings linger on, As life's memories drift along. Moments of another time Come along and touch my mind. These memories I have will always be. But, I'll keep them locked up inside of me. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, Eloise! Those memories are wonderful keepsakes aren't they? |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Where we be without our memories. Nicely done. Joyce |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Eloise, I loved the way this one just flowed along ever so gently. Well done poetess! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Thank you Denise, and absolutely.  Joyce, I know I'd be lost without mine. Thank you for taking time to read and comment  Nancy, coming from you this means alot. Thanks. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sometimes, that's the best place for them. But they are always a part of us and in time, remembering may just bring a small smile to your lips. All writing comes |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Eloise, this is sooooooo beautiful! Memories are such beautiful things to cherish, and you treasure them so wonderfully! (smiles) I can't wait to read of the many other fond memories you hold true! (kiss on cheek) We all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eloise, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this Eloise...James |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
I hope you will share some of those memories with us, if they inspire verse like this, well done and much enjoyed. Regards, Olias. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Wonderful memories to have and to enjoy. Peaches |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Eloise, this is a good one... Well, being alone is definitely not the same as feeling lonely. Sometimes we need to be alone to think of life, love, and reconcile our thoughts and feelings. We can't always be with crowds of people, can we? |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such memories are the true treasures of this life. I really enjoyed reading this poem. Tenderly you held your memories to your heart. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Moments of another time Come along and touch my mind. These memories I have will always be. But, I'll keep them locked up inside of me. ============================ somethings are more special when we keep them to ourselves.... so good to see you posting again... this is a lovely poetic reminder to enjoy lifes little pleasures well done poetess Eloise he said ... "dont cry" ... |
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LadySofia Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 238FL., USA |
Why keep them inside? Share! Share! Excellente! ^_^ LadySofia "The smallest feline is a masterpiece." |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
LoneWolf, I agree they are always apart of you and yes, many of them do bring smiles. Noah, thank you and I will be digging more out. James, I'm glad you enjoyed this. Olias, thank you so much and I will be sharing more as my muse continues to return. Thanks peaches, we all have such memories to share and to keep. I'm glad you liked this vandana. Thank you. Mon Cherie, you're right about lonely and alone. I do enjoy that solitary time when my mind has time to pull out those precious memories. Thanks for reading and commenting Thank you Startime, you always say the nicest things. Janet Marie thanks so much and I'm glad to be back again. Time seems to fly on by but I'm going to try and be back more often. Thank you LadySofia and I plan to. Again thanks to all who have stopped by to read and comment. Much appreciated. |
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