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lone_poet707
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black hole named Aylmer

0 posted 2001-12-03 10:20 PM


U love to watch me
struggle beneath ur iron grip
of malicious oppression.
I drown in this murky sea
of hopeless depression
while my heart u proceed to rip
to bloody extermination.
Slowly yet surely u pick at my pride,
riding ur sinister ego trip
until u find there's nothing left for me
to hide...

© Copyright 2001 Joe Hawley-Shepherd - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-03 10:24 PM


*sigh* I know how this feels. We should never let someone tare us to pieces that way. No one has the right to rip us apart until there is nothing left but it is up to us to stop them. My heart goes out to you. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2001-12-03 10:25 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Joe, my heart goes out to you, your heart bleeds with despair and pain! (sigh) Always find deep down what makes you happy, and never let others hurt you, for you are a very special person and deserve to be loved so very much! (sigh) I pray the greatest hope and love will coem to you, my friend! I love you, sweet friend! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joe, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-12-03 11:23 PM


If someone mistreats you then you are better off without them in your life! There is always someone out there who will treasure your heart instead of tear it out to shreds.
Take Care

RP

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4 posted 2001-12-03 11:48 PM


Swim outta there.
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