Open Poetry #17 |
Nightmare That Lives |
Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Nightmare That Lives Darkness creeps in bringing the dread Stealing the breath waking my dead Walking the path fearful of sin Feeling my heart beating within Painful are thoughts filling my mind Nightmare that lives endless I find Karen Torbiak 2001© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
wow...not your usual fare, but I love dark poetry...there is just something so intimate about it.....as much as I detest nightmares? I love this! Hugs, Karen! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Karen, this is so sad, it brought tears to my eyes! (sigh) I hope everything is OK; if you need someone to talk to to ease the pain, I am always here for you as are others! (sigh) May these nightmares be replaced by more beautiful fantasies of love and joy! (kiss on cheek) I love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Karen, I like this change of pace for you! Walking a little on the dark side...enjoyed! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
serenity..thank you. I can and have written some dark poetry but I tend to feel so strongly that which I write the I do not write too much of it. I am glad you enjoyed the change. **hugs** Noah...Thank you, sweet friend. I am fine...just releasing feelings is all. **hugs** Nancy...I can get very dark and then I feel dark. I would rather live in my fantasies then in the darkness of reality. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
A change can do ya some good, and you've proved that your talent is unlimitted!!! Good write my dear friend RP |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Hey babe, take a walk on the dark side...love this different write from you. |
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