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Startime
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0 posted 2001-12-03 09:50 PM


Nightmare That Lives

Darkness creeps in
bringing the dread
Stealing the breath
waking my dead

Walking the path
fearful of sin
Feeling my heart
beating within

Painful are thoughts
filling my mind
Nightmare that lives
endless I find

Karen Torbiak 2001©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

© Copyright 2001 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2001-12-03 09:55 PM


wow...not your usual fare, but I love dark poetry...there is just something so intimate about it.....as much as I detest nightmares? I love this! Hugs, Karen!
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2 posted 2001-12-03 09:57 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Karen, this is so sad, it brought tears to my eyes! (sigh) I hope everything is OK; if you need someone to talk to to ease the pain, I am always here for you as are others! (sigh) May these nightmares be replaced by more beautiful fantasies of love and joy! (kiss on cheek) I love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-12-03 10:02 PM


Oh Karen, I like this change of pace for you!
Walking a little on the dark side...enjoyed!
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Startime
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4 posted 2001-12-03 10:28 PM


serenity..thank you. I can and have written some dark poetry but I tend to feel so strongly that which I write the I do not write too much of it. I am glad you enjoyed the change. **hugs**

Noah...Thank you, sweet friend. I am fine...just releasing feelings is all. **hugs**

Nancy...I can get very dark and then I feel dark. I would rather live in my fantasies then in the darkness of reality. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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5 posted 2001-12-03 11:33 PM


A change can do ya some good, and you've proved that your talent is unlimitted!!!
Good write my dear friend

RP

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6 posted 2001-12-03 11:41 PM


Hey babe, take a walk on the dark side...love this different write from you.
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