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When We Dance
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When We Dance |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“WHEN WE DANCE” by Bill Charles ~~~~ The music played on, and I listened to the rhythm enticing my soul, as I held you tighter when we danced this night… It’s surreal when we touch, knowing the warmth that radiates from two, so close, swaying, moving together, as one… Close your eyes and feel the warmth, magic, the intimacy of your caress, and know how I love you... You whisper into my ear of romance, caring, and I feel the beating of hearts together, when we dance… ~~~~ [This message has been edited by Bill Charles (edited 12-03-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Bill, you're sooooooooo romantic, your love must have melted when you read this poem to her as you danced! (smiles) May you always feel her heart beat to yours in eternal rhythm of true love! Sooooooooo lovely, sweet friend, I love your declarations of love! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
and the band still plays on...helen |
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PoetriPrincess Member
since 2001-11-17
Posts 55CA / U.S.A |
I agree with Mistletoe Angel, "This is very Romantic" Nice Read, Bill. A Musician must make his Music, |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
You have captured the dance moment well  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* ohhhh how I love a dance like this....so just save the next dance for me, will you Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - your heart is most beautiful, and also filled with love. Thank you for your reply to this writing... 1slick_lady - yes, it still plays on, as it will. To dance such as this, a'hhhh.... PoetriPrincess - thank you for coming by to read this writing, and for your reply... lunatic - and a moment it is. Thank you... Charisma - I also, love to dance like this. The next one is yours, I promise... |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Oh I love to dance! You are a genuine, loving man! ((((warm hugs))))) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I wish someone would take me in their arms and teach me how to dance. This sounded so wonderfully romantic. I love it. **hugs**  *sigh*Swaying heart to heart two beats become one Music moves lovers in eternal dance Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bill, ...save the last dance for me?..  "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
RosePetal - you are very sweet, thank you. I love to dance also... Startime - OK, I'll show you how... Enchantress - for you, more than the last one... |
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