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Looking For You |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
If I went looking for a love for my life I would look for someone like you They would be just like you Sweet, sensual, kind and loving Their eyes will be just as bright and shining as yours The things I long for A sweet loving nature, soft gentle touch The words I love you Would mean so much I get lost in your eyes I long for your touch A kiss would say so much The thrill in your eyes When I say, I love you They wouldn't be just words Of that, you can rest assured I would prove my love for you So you would have no doubts Just love me in return and make me shout Loving you with my heart Shall be where I start Loving you with my mind You will find That I've always loved you © alan [This message has been edited by Alan (edited 12-03-2001).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is exquisite! So beautiful, so tender, so romantic. May I keep it? |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
If you wish.. then you may.. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice thoughts...James |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Wonderful words and thoughts.Oh so romantic. Peaches |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Alan, this is so sweet!!! How I wish someone was saying that to me!  |
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misguided angel Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 106Australia |
Oh Alan, this is lovely. Someone is a very lucky lady  Andrea. Oh and whens the picnic?  Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Alan, you always write romance so beautifully, this will have your love swooning and dancing in happiness forever! (sigh) You're so romantic, sweet friend, may her eyes forever sparkle with tears of joy that smile having such a beautiful love like you! (big hugggsssssss) I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Wow! Talk about being a romantic! I hope you experience the love that you're hoping for. Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It’s good to see you again! This is filled with longing. Kathleen (Kay) "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Alan, who ever she is, she is very lucky this is perfectly romantic....*sigh* a definate keeper |
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