Open Poetry #17 |
. . . Lips embracing life |
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Short, but sweet |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
crystal flute singing champagne's bubbles soon to pop upon lips of life |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
He slips quietly between the lines and captures the essence of you, then deftly fashions romantic rhymes kissed lovingly in artist's hue. That IS you. |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
That was creative.. it didnt take alot of words for you to create somethign that was awesome...... talent and creativeness |
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PoetriPrincess Member
since 2001-11-17
Posts 55CA / U.S.A |
"Short N' Sweet" ~ Indeed. A Musician must make his Music, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Soooooo beautiful! A sip of eternal love! I always love how you get inspired, it's so enchanting! I love it!!! (big huggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!! it's so good to be inspired by another poet, and you have done a great job....like it a lot. And thanks for the link, so I was able to read Startime's Beauty too (((hugs))) Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I love this. |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
I'm loving this! Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I am going to have to try a shorter verse, I admire someone who can say so much in such few lines. Kathleen (Kay) |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ooh, I do like this very much |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
kudos to the master of this style.. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Mother_Earth ~ That's the way I like 'em Lady ~ champagne or nector life lives upon your sweet lips and I would taste them Midnitesun ~ I'm speechless ... Deepest thanks! GhostWriter_6 ~ I think my first time to hear from you. Thank you very much PP ~ Yes. Thank you Noah ~ You are too good to be true Charisma ~ That's why I put in the link ... I'd like to share her talent and the source of my inspiration walker ~ Many thanx Domzi ~ That makes me happy Colleen ~ You are too nice SEA ~ {melting} Thanx, gal Balladeer ~ High approbation form THE master at Passions. I am honored by your words Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
a smile lights her eyes embraced in the love of life and kissed by your charms Beautifully sensual and I love it. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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