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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-12-03 12:11 PM


her lips embracing
crystal flute shudders with joy
as she drinks of life
~*~

Inspired by:  Do I Sip?


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Mother_Earth
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1 posted 2001-12-03 12:17 PM


Short, but sweet
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2 posted 2001-12-03 12:22 PM



crystal flute singing
champagne's bubbles soon to pop
upon lips of life

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3 posted 2001-12-03 12:34 PM



He slips quietly between the lines
and captures the essence of you,
then deftly fashions romantic rhymes
kissed lovingly in artist's hue.

That IS you.

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4 posted 2001-12-03 12:51 PM


That was creative.. it didnt take alot of words for you to create somethign that was awesome...... talent and creativeness

PoetriPrincess
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5 posted 2001-12-03 02:23 PM


"Short N' Sweet" ~ Indeed.

A Musician must make his Music,
An Artist must Paint,
A Poet must Write,
if he/she is to ultimately
be at Peace with himself.
     ~ Abraham Ma

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6 posted 2001-12-03 03:01 PM




(smiles) Soooooo beautiful! A sip of eternal love! I always love how you get inspired, it's so enchanting! I love it!!! (big huggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2001-12-03 03:13 PM


BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!

it's so good to be inspired by another poet, and you have done a great job....like it a lot. And thanks for the link, so I was able to read Startime's Beauty too  

(((hugs)))
Charisma

~*Theresia~*

walker
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8 posted 2001-12-03 04:39 PM


I love this.
Domzi
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9 posted 2001-12-03 04:59 PM


I'm loving this!

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

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10 posted 2001-12-03 05:18 PM


I am going to have to try a shorter verse, I admire someone who can say so much in such few lines.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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11 posted 2001-12-03 10:58 PM


ooh, I do like this very much  
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12 posted 2001-12-03 11:08 PM


kudos to the master of this style..
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Deep in the heart
13 posted 2001-12-04 12:29 PM


Mother_Earth ~
That's the way I like 'em  

Lady ~
champagne or nector
life lives upon your sweet lips
and I would taste them

Midnitesun ~
I'm speechless ... Deepest thanks!

GhostWriter_6 ~
I think my first time to hear from you.  Thank you very much  

PP ~
Yes. Thank you  

Noah ~
You are too good to be true  

Charisma ~
That's why I put in the link ... I'd like to share her talent and the source of my inspiration

walker ~
Many thanx

Domzi ~
That makes me happy  

Colleen ~
You are too nice  

SEA ~
{melting}  Thanx, gal  

Balladeer ~
High approbation form THE master at Passions.  I am honored by your words  

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Startime
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14 posted 2001-12-04 02:29 PM


a smile lights her eyes
embraced in the love of life
and kissed by your charms

Beautifully sensual and I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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