First Kiss (Marge's Challenge #3)

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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2001-12-03 09:47 PM

First Kiss
By: Noah Eaton
12/3/01

Butterflies within flutter to falling sunlight
Slowly and softly, lips quiver with delight
A sweet stirring of anticipation twitters within me
Hummingbirds of desire plucking at my heartstrings
Temptation, passion, brewing like apple cider in the morning
Cinnamon spice and everything nice simmering

My lips dare to speak, but rather tremble shy
All I want is to touch you now, hearing hearts whispers jive
Feeling your heart beat to mine, feeling your heart convey
Cooing like a choir of doves in a beachside soiree
Your wind sweeps me off my feet and into your heart in courante
Dancing this ballet of passion, you are everything I want

Caress me now, lovely lady, my heart awaits you
My lips sing for yours, touching an angel so true
Together we will share this first kiss, a kiss of heavenly light
Kiss me, my love
I dream to eternally hear you sigh…
As if this was our first kiss…
Forever and ever…

Kiss me…my love…

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 12-03-2001).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-12-03 09:56 PM

Sweet kisses to you dear Noah! A challenge well met!
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Hypnosis
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since 2001-12-02

Posts 325
CO

2 posted 2001-12-03 09:59 PM

Ah, this is a very touching poem my friend. Yes i too have had these type of feelings for something in my dreams to come along and sweep me away forever.  Your poems have evolved over the years to become some of the best i have seen.  You are doing a good job.  Keep up the good work and keep ypur mind an open one my good friend.  I look forward to posting with you here on a regular basis.  Well my friend, i look to read more of your poems soon.

        your good friend

            Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-12-03 10:08 PM

And a

for you, dear Noah, for this poem is truly deserving of many kisses. Very well done. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

4 posted 2001-12-03 10:08 PM

If I were 30 years younger.. and single...!!!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-12-03 10:53 PM

you are such a romantic!! This is gorgeous dear Noah

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

6 posted 2001-12-03 11:09 PM

Wow Noah...look at all these kisses you are getting from everyone! You are quite the kissable stud...my stud! Pucker up and give me a kiss! ((tight hugs))

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-12-03 11:16 PM

Noah~
Nicely met for the challenge~
Thanks again for your words of inspire~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

8 posted 2001-12-04 04:04 AM

Noah,
Poor Marge, so many words ...so little time
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2001-12-04 01:32 PM

Enjoyed this Noah...James

True Reflections
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 143
Ohio, USA

10 posted 2001-12-04 02:32 PM

Noah,
Kissing smilies and offers galore. Who could possibly want for more?
Very beautifully written.

Roger

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