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His Name Was Forever
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His Name Was Forever |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
He told me his name was Forever And I believed him to the very end He said I was his only sun Then I was left with an eclipse He was everything a maiden dreamed of And the ancient one only remembers I tried to hold on to the promise But the mist of my mind disolved thought Today is at forevers end and nothing beyond I've climbed the mountain to the top But can't use the same foot holds to come down It all started when he said his name was Forever |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
the mist of my mind disolved thought ... some excellent phrases in this one... Much Enjoyed Mother Earth... Thanks, Regards, sudhir |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Mother Earth, I really enjoyed reading this, though the feelings behind it is not in the least enjoyable...  "I've climbed the mountain to the top But can't use the same foot holds to come down" This is what happens when we're given false hopes, isn't it?? First, they make us so happy, it feels like we're on the top of the world. When this platform of 'hope' vanishes, we plummet to rock bottom. Unpleasant...  [This message has been edited by Mon Cherie (edited 12-03-2001).] |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Sudhir, thanks for your answer Mon Cherie, I see you understand. But we keep looking for another Forever. |
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Glenn Logan Member
since 2001-10-10
Posts 111Virginia |
I've climbed the mountain to the top But can't use the same foot holds to come down! Very nicely written. Glenn Logan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mother, A good read, enjoyed |
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owgman New Member
since 2001-12-03
Posts 5 |
sometimes we just have to stay on he mountain..dug it!! |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Glenn, Seymour and owgman: seems we all like the view from the top of the mountain and don't worry about the climb down. Thanks all! |
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