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Poet deVine
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0 posted 2001-11-30 11:24 PM





I sing a song in poet's voice
Can you hear my words of praise
Songs of love and songs of hate
Endless nights and shortened days

I may not always sing on key
Nor find the chord you'll love
But my heart will try to sing
About what the world's made of

I sing the song of triumph
Of pure love over pure hate
And hope you hear the words
Hope the song isn't too late

Each verse will tell my story
In tones loud and clear
I'll sing until the poetic cops
Drag me out of here!

© Copyright 2001 Poet deVine - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-30 11:40 PM


Your's is certainly the voice of a poet! I very much enjoyed this one.

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison


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2 posted 2001-11-30 11:43 PM


Hey! I thought you WERE a poetic cop! lol...

but this is in tune with one I just wrote...
funny how we write in tune sometimes.

"head down? keep on typing!"

Love you!


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3 posted 2001-11-30 11:44 PM


Poetic cops, huh?  Now that's a funny image.  Love the poem!
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4 posted 2001-12-01 10:19 PM


*sings along* Poet's voices are the best to listen to!

God bless America, my home sweet home.

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5 posted 2001-12-01 10:27 PM


Keep on singing, it's music to my ears! err better yet..eyes lol
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6 posted 2001-12-01 10:34 PM


Every key you hit sings a perfect tune of its own. BRAVO!!!Keep singing, dear Poet. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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7 posted 2001-12-01 10:37 PM




(giggles) Yep yep yep, but with your beauty and style, you will forever be innocent from charge from those poetic cops! (smiles) We all love your beautiful words, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) Keep writing always! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Canada eh.
8 posted 2001-12-01 11:02 PM


Each verse will tell my story
In tones loud and clear
I'll sing until the poetic cops
Drag me out of here!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Excellent!  I love this one!  
Last stanza really made me chuckle!  
Thank you, hugs, Nancy.

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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9 posted 2001-12-01 11:59 PM


I just love this Poet deVine. Enjoyed reading it.
Nan
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10 posted 2001-12-02 10:09 AM


You sing a deVinely mellifluent song...
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11 posted 2001-12-02 10:23 AM


DeVine One,
You are in good write, Enjoyed. *L*

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12 posted 2001-12-02 10:42 AM


Thank you all!!! But if the truth were told, I can't carry a tune to save my life!!  
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13 posted 2001-12-02 11:19 AM


enjoy
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14 posted 2001-12-04 11:41 AM


PoetdeVine~
Well .. we'll all be thankful you have found the singing INK~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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15 posted 2001-12-04 02:18 PM


Very cute, very whimsical. I like this one. *SMILE*

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

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16 posted 2001-12-04 02:26 PM


You sing a song that's true,
and no matter what happens
we won't let the poetry cops get you!

Cor

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17 posted 2001-12-04 02:32 PM


well, I wouldn't mind putting some cuffs on ya - heh
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18 posted 2001-12-04 02:43 PM


I have a "get out of jail free" card if you would like it

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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19 posted 2001-12-04 05:01 PM


Your poetic voice is in perfect tune, PDV... may your song continue forever! *S* I like this very much!
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