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0 posted 2001-12-04 09:06 PM


Lovely softly
just like your voice
and your touch
of your sensitive hands
guards your side,
stands by you at the moon.
Tender sweet touch
of your smile on the glove
gently...takes care of your love.

May I be your cup
that you hold,
carefully washed by you.
May I be your glove
that hold you,
ever so watchful stay by you.

Your love...touches not one
but many...like the bubbles of your soap,
that my heart can't hold
any longer but melt
like the oil with the soap.

Every touch of you is beautiful;
every plate you wash shine on you.
And this very day
I hand you my glove.

//What do you think? I was practicing choosing an adjective and an object to write, 'delicate' and 'glove' come to my mind. Do you think one would take the hand of the one who offer this lovely glove?

~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.
~Just when I thought it is too far away, opportunity knocks the door

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1 posted 2001-12-04 09:13 PM




(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet Lizzy! (smiles) Your love shines always in your gorgeous words, as he will forever take your hand and dance eternal loves dance with you into heavenly love with your silk glove! (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, I love you, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lizzy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-04 09:23 PM



Liz, your every effort suits me just fine...I am going to be forward to watching you express yourself as you grow, and glow, with the lexis of your time...

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