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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-12-05 08:12 PM


Your love fills my world with rainbows
With you I soar on the wings of a dove
Such a gift has been bestowed upon me
This precious gift called love

My life loses some of its meaning
When you're not here by my side
So often I wear my heart on my sleeve
My love for you I cannot hide

There's no song without your words
In my heart there is no tune
But we create our very own symphony
As our love takes us to the moon

But whenever you and I are together
You lift my spirits high above
How very blessed am I
To be surrounded by your love

The flame becomes so much brighter
The flowers more fresh and sweet
My feet barely touch the ground
Whenever the two of us meet

You're the ember in my fire
How you warm my inner soul
The atmosphere becomes electric
How you make my heart feel whole

I'll keep love's fire burning
Right here inside my heart
This flame shall burn eternally
As you and I will never part


Suetang

[This message has been edited by Suetang (edited 12-05-2001).]

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Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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1 posted 2001-12-05 08:15 PM


*sigh* isn't it amazing what love can do to us. I love this poem. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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2 posted 2001-12-05 08:16 PM


You lucky gal!  I love reading stuff like this!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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3 posted 2001-12-05 08:18 PM




(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet Sue, the embers of love fill your heart, lighting it with romance! (sigh) May his flame forever warm your loving heart! (sigh) We all love you, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have sucha  beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Hypnosis
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since 2001-12-02
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4 posted 2001-12-05 08:20 PM


I have felt what you have felt.  Love is the most powerful thing i know in the world today.  Not the power of 1000 atomic bombs can measure up to the power of love between two people, nicely stated, very stricking with my heart.

      Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

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