Playful Midnight Train Medley for Marge

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Midnitesun

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0 posted 2001-12-04 04:08 AM

I was traveling on my last train ride,
with my guardian muse at my side.
I turned and asked quietly,
"When God gets done with me,
can I still go back to yesterday
just one more time? to visit
sweetest memory of
first love, first kiss?"
   It was underneath a sticky warm
   butterscotch sky,
   in that magical moment when
   summer sunlight falls lazily away
   and dreams us deep into slumber sleep.
   And just before the whispers of dawn
   I found myself floating on a
   sentimental shakedown cruise,
   my mind adrift remembering how
        we ran across a field of lilacs
        spread like splashes of Monet.
        You held me tight and dared I
        be not a stranger to Love.
   O the many shades of green I saw that day
   on the faces of a dozen bakery girls
   as they watched us climb aboard
   that midnight train to Georgia.
But my moment of remembered ecstasy shattered
when I heard the conductor shouting loudly,
"Mama! Get off that train!"
And I heard myself shouting defiantely,
"Son! Just how long did it take you to get that ugly?"
And then that train derailed, right outside of Tallahassee.

Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2001-12-04 04:18 AM

This is 2good ...

regards,
sudhir

Midnitesun

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2 posted 2001-12-04 04:31 AM

HAHAHA. Thanks, poet Sudhir. Now go see the reply I left on yours.

Poor Marge, how in the world can she choose? Her guardian muse will have to jump on that Poet baggage train and help her.

Larry C

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3 posted 2001-12-05 12:41 PM

Midnitesun,
See, I missed too much. I was thinking I wanted on this train ride and then it got ugly...LOL

Balladeer

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4 posted 2001-12-05 12:48 PM

Been smoking those funny looking icicyles lately, midnitesun?

Midnitesun

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5 posted 2001-12-05 01:05 AM

LOL, Larry, that train ride story was a strange one for me, and the only way to end it was to derail it, since I ran out of Margie phrases after that ugly line. Her challenge is challenging, but fun.

Balladeer, YESSIR, those frozen things are the best, they melt in your mouth, and keep you from burning out too early in life. LOL, that poem nearly de-railed me last night.

Duncan
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6 posted 2001-12-05 02:55 AM

Can always count on you for a laugh. Thanks, Kacy.

Kethry
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7 posted 2001-12-05 02:57 AM

Midnitesun,
well that was fun
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Midnitesun

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8 posted 2001-12-05 03:27 AM

Duncan, happy to see you here and laughing.

Kethry, thanks for the visit. It was an unusual train ride fantasy.

N orth Carolina Girl
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9 posted 2001-12-05 03:13 PM

Midnitesun,oh this was so funny!

I`m really looking forward to more of your poems.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Joyce Johnson

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10 posted 2001-12-05 03:16 PM

I loved it. The prize winner for sure. Joyce

Midnitesun

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11 posted 2001-12-05 03:21 PM

NC, thanks! Happy to give you a smile.

Joyce? Thank you so much. You are too kind! But the competition is fiercely fantastic! I'm just having fun. But of course, a new poetry book would be nice

Marge Tindal

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12 posted 2001-12-05 03:24 PM

MidniteSun~
I'm simply blown away with laughter at your 'inspired thoughts'~

You keep me on my toes, gal~

I don't EVEN want this train-of-thought to derail !

Such fun ... thank you for playing~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Interloper

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Deep in the heart

13 posted 2001-12-05 03:43 PM

{grin}
Regale us the more with your wit

I love it!

Mistletoe Angel

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14 posted 2001-12-05 03:49 PM

(giggles) Oh Kathleen, this is sooooooo funny and clever, I love it! (smiles) What an amusing ride it must had been! (sigh) I always love your wonderful words, sweet Kathleen, you bring laughs and tears and smiles to us all! (kiss on cheek) More, more!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Canada eh.

15 posted 2001-12-05 04:05 PM

Love your quick wit Kacy!
This is excellent! AND sooo funny!
~Hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Midnitesun

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16 posted 2001-12-05 05:51 PM

Hello muse Marge

I'll try not to de-rail anyone's thought train.

"Loper,

grins to you too

Noah, hop aboard, I'll drop you off to visit your Rose Petals (before de-railment)

Nancy, glad to share some healing laughter and smiles.

Denise

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17 posted 2001-12-05 07:54 PM

Hilarious, Midnitesun! Challenge well met!

Midnitesun

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18 posted 2001-12-05 08:29 PM

Denise, thank you!

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