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dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

0 posted 2001-11-29 12:58 PM

i want to sing
but i dont know
               the
                    tune
and it seems
     the words
          escape me

i want to dream
but i cant
          close
               my
                    eyes
and somehow, the dreams,
they chafe me

i want to scream
but i cant find my
               voice
it feels as though the silence
          has
                    raped
                              me

the silence taunts me
when i want
          to
               laugh
the emptiness will surround
          and
               encase
                    me...

-dgvarner
11-28-01

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"tomorrow's another day, and i'm thirsty anyway--so bring on the rain!"

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

1 posted 2001-11-29 01:47 AM

you get better and better..........!

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

2 posted 2001-11-29 01:47 AM

.... there's no escaping that fact......

wonderful!

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2001-11-29 06:09 AM

Beautiful!!

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

4 posted 2001-11-29 06:20 AM

this is really well done...

regards,
sudhir

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

5 posted 2001-11-29 06:28 AM

This is very good!!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

6 posted 2001-11-29 07:57 AM

you are becoming a big favorite poet of mine.
This was great

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

7 posted 2001-11-29 10:05 AM

WOW!!!!This is excellent. I love it. Very well done. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

8 posted 2001-11-29 11:08 AM

Do you need to be encased?

got handcuffs.... I won't let you escape me.

oops did I say that out loud.

Parker

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

9 posted 2001-11-29 11:55 AM

Good write.
Hope the music returns soon.

Hugs,
Deb

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

10 posted 2001-12-02 01:16 PM

DOREEN..thanks for a wonderful reply

really appreciate hearing from you

CHARISMA..thank you for 'beautiful'

SUDHIR..many thanks for that

EAGLE..and much thanks to you too

BERNIE..

favorite poet of yours?? cool..

glad youre enjoying..i enjoy hearing from you

STARTIME..big thanks for the 'wow'

PARKER..LOL@you...

handcuffs?!@%? you kinky soul you....

DEB..thank you much

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"tomorrow's another day, and i'm thirsty anyway--so bring on the rain!"

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