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Rain and Roses |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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The rain for you I'd give Sprinkle roses In soft white Among your bed Watch the whispers Fall across your lips As you say my name Your voice in the Night, I feel you Near, I feel you In my heart I have walked This road before Somewhere Down a distant highway Where we danced In moonlit strands Can I have one Last memory With you One last walk in the rain, That which is the fire In the sky I am she who will sing the storm ***** I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-29-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Love the thoughts...nice title...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You write the most beautiful love poetry. And I love reading it. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - I'm very touched by your lovely romantic writings. They are excellent... BC |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Watch the whispers Fall across your lips As you say my name Your voice in the Night, I feel you Near, I feel you =============================== Where we danced In moonlit strands Can I have one Last memory With you One last walk in the rain, That which is the fire In the sky I am she who will sing the storm ======================================= my oh my...this is a sigh on high... Lauren this is stunning in its delicately expressed longing and devotion.. whispered softly... yet speaking volumes. How well I know these feelings... the fire that burns always... the storm in constant stirring beneath the skin... the ache that never leaves...and I pray it never will... for all the right reasons  he said ... "dont cry" ... |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I wonder ... have you ever actually danced in the rain? It sounds like you have ... and captured the moment well. Let it rain  |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
very beautiful! rain can be romantic!!! : ) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ Sweet poetess ... this is lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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PoeticLicense Junior Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 30 |
The soft beauty of your words never fails to please this reader, enjoyed, thank you! PL |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
JamesMichael~ Thank you for your thoughts.... ~~ Midnitesun~ I am glad you came by to read, it's an added smile to my face....thank you my friend... ~~ Bill Charles~ I have always been touched by yours as well thank you for letting me know... I appreciate that...~~ Janet Marie~ for all the right reasons, yes....keep the fires burning.....keep the storms stirring....Peace dear friend.... ~~ Ctowen~ Yes, let it rain, and save a dance..... thank you for your thoughts..... ~~ RosePetal~ Indeed it can be, the connection with storms, rain and nature can be most romantic...I enjoyed your comment.... ~~ Marge~ Hi there my friend, so good to see that smile....I appreciate you....~HUGS~ right back to you.... ~~ Poeticlicense~ thank you for letting me know, I enjoyed your comment.....very kind of you to say.... ~~ Be well be safe....Peace.... Greeneyes~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-30-2001).] |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
You already know how much I love this piece, my friend. It is truly some of your best work. (((hugs)))Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you pull out the softest images my friend. . . always. . . sometimes, I just get lost in them. . . thank you for sharing. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Your words are like rain AND roses. I tell you they soothe....love it when you write like this! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Can I have one Last memory With you One last walk in the rain, That which is the fire In the sky I am she who will sing the storm ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Lauren~This is simply your best! Just beautiful...I am in awe! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
The rain for you I'd give Sprinkle roses In soft white Among your bed Watch the whispers Fall across your lips As you say my name ================== I like the image this puts in my mind. I think of watery trails on the cool window glass. A bed with soft satin sheets, and white rose petals all over the covers. Oooooohhhh... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very romantic my friend...jwesley |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Your words whisper so softly Lauren, they speak in volumes. Lovely as always. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I really am so humbled by these replies....thank you all so much for taking your time to come in and read....  be well be safe all..... Lauren~ I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 12-02-2001).] |
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