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Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

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where insanity meets breeding

0 posted 2001-10-04 10:51 PM

I have no feelings any more
I swear my heart walked out the door
Feel nothing now, my soul is dead
Empty thoughts inside my head
Even you the great love of my life
For you I cannot even write
My pen is lost, the ink is dry
Oh God, how I wish I could cry
Emotions. Now where did they go?
Even the ones that laid me low
I really want to feel again
Come back my heart, and be my friend
I had a heart, I had a soul
On the path of life they missed a road
My heart got lost, my soul did too
Maybe they weren’t being used
I don’t want love, I’m done with that
I threw that ball, it missed the bat
Well, maybe no, that isn’t true
One day I’ll love, just don’t know who
Maybe feeling will come back
I'm still young, still time for that
The numbness. Will it dissipate?
I hope that it won't be too late

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2001-10-04 10:54 PM

A well written purge, Tracey!
Gosh, if only you knew how much this speaks of me.

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

2 posted 2001-10-04 10:58 PM

I do know Melissa. I just read your latest. I think you're my twin!!!

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Balladeer

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3 posted 2001-10-04 10:59 PM

"I threw the ball, it missed the bat"...what a wonderful line....

What a beautiful picture, Tracey! The batter must have been blind...

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

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4 posted 2001-10-04 11:08 PM

I don’t want love, I’m done with that
I threw that ball, it missed the bat

I believe the bat holds some responsibility in this. Unfortunately (lol), love is like riding a bike, you can't forget how to do it even if you try.

Tracey
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Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2001-10-04 11:15 PM

Ah, Bal and Duncan, you're both so sweet. And Duncan, you're absolutely right with the bike analogy. No doubt I will fall again. Just seems a little safer to stay off the bike for a while

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

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Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2001-10-04 11:17 PM

Tracey-
   Nice expression of some painful emotions.
   Well done.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

7 posted 2001-10-04 11:31 PM

nice rhyming, Tracey, I enjoyed many lines..but you know what, we have no control over loving nor being loved....in some ways that's good, for when it happens it's a nice surprise.*s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

8 posted 2001-10-05 06:44 AM

Sometimes that special love you once had for that special someone...just dies or becomes tucked away in the pages of your life. It has to be nurtured and caressed to grow. Plant your seed in the light of someone that will see it as the rose it is. You are not done yet!

Sincerely,
Regina

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

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The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2001-10-05 05:05 PM

Tracey, I like this so much. I understand, too. I hope you are feeling happy again soon.
Sandra

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

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Melbourne, Australia

10 posted 2001-10-05 06:38 PM

Tracey
What a heartbreaking piece of writing you have penned from your wonderful palette of words. This one touched my soul and made me feel so sad for you, such power I felt from your words. I hope love adorns your lovely heart once more and brings back your wonderful smile. Take care......Sue

Suetang

Kit McCallum

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11 posted 2001-10-05 06:55 PM

Wonderful expression Tracey ... truly heartfelt sentiments that could be felt clearly through your words, very nicely written.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

12 posted 2001-10-05 11:46 PM

Vicky, thanks, it was a blue day. I don't get too many thank god

Nakedthoughts-how true, we have no control over it.

Regina-you are so sweet. I swear, you have one of the kindest, gentlest souls that I have ever seen

Hi Sandra-I'll be okay soon. We all have our off days. Fortunately, mine don't last too long. Thanks for the thoughts

Suetang-thanks for your thoughts too. And I assure you, my smile will be back soon. Then I shall haunt you all with silly verses again

Kit-thank you for your thoughts. And congratulations on your 8,000 posts. And may there be many more

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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