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A Moth Turned Butterfly
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A Moth Turned Butterfly |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Moth Turned Butterfly A moth of bliss turned butterfly A wisp that kissed a memories sigh She turned the world from old to new. By hew and color of her view. But She seemed a flighty moth to me Until I saw her poetry And then she turned the brightest star That I have seen the sky so far And It turned the darkness that I store And opened up my dreamers door The moth that turned a butterfly Had swept me up into the sky. Then I felt a soaring in my goal And saw a light. Light up my soul. She sent a wind within a sigh To lift me high so I could fly. While Her gentle hands reset my keel To set a seal and make it heal. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You hinged this so very well, and I of course saw her heart swell... |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You're the greatest, dear Sy..   |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww~ That's soooooooooooo sweet~ What a loving man you are~ Big *hugs* to your poetic heart~ Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, You have a good portion of my heart. *L* Sunshine, You keep it from freezing over. *L* Marge, You also have a good portion of my heart. *L* I love you all dearly. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is very good. I enjoyed reading it. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Beautiful expression  and a splendid read for me 2day thank you PoetFriend...*~coco~* [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 10-04-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Beautiful and delicate as she is, sy.... You ARE my morning coffee! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Once again you ring my bells ... ching my chimes you wrap my heart ... in thy randy rhymes I hang on your every word ... I have from the start your gifted poets pen ... your cupid's dart Your verse of wisdom ... a golden light to guide our way lessons of wrong and right ... we learn from you each day Never doubt dear Sy ... we are better for your touch the things you teach and share ... they mean so much The wind beneath my wings ... my sweet sigh on high You make a tired moth believe ... she can indeed be a butterfly ~*~  ~*~ (did you just know how much I needed this today) somehow I know you did *S* Thank you Stinky ... very much   love you(Randy too)  *winkiwinkie* |
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Twilight Myst Member
since 2001-10-04
Posts 58Just A Myst At Twilight |
I felt a soaring in my goal And saw a light. Light up my soul. She sent a wind within a sigh To lift me high so I could fly ~~~~~~~~~~ A beautiful gem this one is... Wonderfully expressed!! Bravo to you sir!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, What a sweet remark *L* SmartChick, Glad you enoyed. Coco, Thank you for the read and nice comp. JM, Some times are more difficult than others Just thought I'd help a little. We love you Randy and Sy Twilight, Thanks for the wonderful. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Seymour~ Aww! I'm loving this I just wrote a poem about being a butterfly just the other day but it was nothing compared to this beauty. What a sweet man you are Lovely!Hugs, ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I simply love the imagery in this one. Yep... love this poem! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
As usal, Sy, you have a great way of turning the phrases so well. I enjoyed this very much. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krista, A sweet response, thank you And thank you Munda. LngJhnAg, Thank you my friend and how are things with you? |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
*sigh* When you say it she finally listens Thank you sweet Sy...The beauty of yourwords have made a flutter in my day~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Butterflies, Thank you for the sweet comment. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Seymour- This is absolutely lovely, my friend. What a sweet render. Love it. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vicky, Thank you for the lovely. *L* |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sy, what a beautiful offering from your beautiful heart. I love this! It's touching to see how good you are to sweet Janet Marie~ Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is so charming. What lovely thoughts you impart here. Loved it If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mellisa, JM is the tinkerbell of passions. Thank you. Tracey, Thank you so much for the charming. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
A really wonderous treat to the heart. Your words have such vision and create just that. Sincerely, Regina |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I know whenever I read your words that I am in for a treat...always in rhyme and never without heart. Thank you for a morning smile *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, this is too wonderful for words Sy! What a marvelous tribute to JM ... the warmth flowing throughout these lines is beautiful indeed ... she is a special lady! Best wishes and hugs to you both, /Kit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rwood, A sweet response, thank you Wynter, You are welcome to the smile and keep smiling. *L* Kit, Thank you and yes she is a special lady. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--How did I miss this twinkle in your eye...a poem to the moth become a butterfly, for with the blooming of your words, I think she sees that her wings are not seen but heard. Thank you for this, Sy...and Janet Marie, I loved your reply. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sweet Martie, You are just,.........Elegant. |
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