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Natures Gift |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Her name was Sienna born the first day of Autumn maple leaves rustled in the wind and to her mothers surprise she had caramel eyes not blue like the powder within the sky Innocent eyes, the shade of autumn nutmeg and ginger and a dash of copper and gold Sienna was her name beautiful as a grande dame robins sang in a nest of harmony Her biological father she never knew his eyes caramel not blue was just a brief starry eyed encounter her mothers husband just smiled he thought for a while and remembered her best friend Kate a distant sultry affair in his glove compartment, her lace underwear They welcomed their sweet Sienna a gift they would both share into the forgiving, brisk autumn air. Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. Pablo Picasso [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-04-2001).] |
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Twilight Myst Member
since 2001-10-04
Posts 58Just A Myst At Twilight |
A fabulous read Victoria!! So vivid are these verses... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
an interesting tale... with nice imagery.... I enjoyed the read..and the story. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
such beautiful descriptions of a lovely little girl.... Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul.... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is the first one I've read of your poems, but it will not be the last. What a truthful sounding tale, one for a real Sienna to fall back on someday. I love the way you used color to color the emotional layers in this. |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Terrific read for such a special little girl! Nice to meet you.  ~Marie~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I had to read this one twice to get all the info absorbed...sort of a spicey write ~V...*s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
indeed it IS spicy, and that is such a lovely name to be given. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you to everyone...so happy you enjoyed... ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Victoria, now this is an unusual autumn poem! Very nice. Beautifully phrased. Sandra |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I enjoyed this one very much! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Sandra and Eddie..nice to hear from you both.. hugss~Victoria~ |
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