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The Sea
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The Sea |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
The Sea My mind drifts back to fun filled times of days so happy and free of waves and sand castles all around.. and seashells found by me. The smell of salt in the air the seagulls walking by the warm breezes and sunny days.. of Mom, Dad and I. We walked and played by the sea rode waves and drifted back to shore the castles that we had made.. soon to be found no more. Years have passed I venture back to the sea so fair the waves the same, the smell so devine and sand castles in the air. I find a place of beauty so captivating to me and as I walk along the beach.. I find tranquility. The warm sun upon my face the rippling tides beneath my feet I still remember of those times gone by, of Mom, Dad and I.. by the beautiful tranquil sea. ~sunshinemist~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Marie! This is just sooo beautiful!! It took me right there and held me there till the end. Well done! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Nancy, Thank you so very much. I was hoping to capture that for all. A memory trip to the sea. Glad that you enjoyed it.  hugs, Marie |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Marie, you have captured your memories lovingly and beautifully! Well done. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
GentleSpirit, Thank you so much for coming with me down memory lane. Hugs, Marie |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Marie, How pleasant to find such a fine poem that echos my memories too. Such fond memories they are. Larry C Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either. larry c |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Larry, Thank you for reading and glad that you went back with me to those fond memories. Warm smiles,  Marie |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Yes you can go home even if it's only in your memory.Keep them comming. paladin |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What lovely memories you have here. Enjoyed hearing them from you. Reminded me of my memories by the sea in England. Yes you've taken me right back there If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Marie - This is beautiful for the memories it evokes. The flow seemed to ebb and flow, just like the sea, which gave the structure of the poem a strength of its own. |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Paladin, Thank you kindly. It's nice to venture back amoung the many memories. ~Marie~ Vanda, Glad that you liked it. Thanks for coming along. ~Marie~ Tracy,I am delighted to take you back to your sea in England. I do love the sea. ~Marie~ LngJhnAg,thank you so much for your lovely comments. I never realized that the poem was flowing. Thank you! ~Marie~ Thank you all, much appreciated! |
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