Open Poetry #16 |
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Lost at Sea |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Lost at Sea with no one to save me, No one understands the torment, The endless nights of dreams, Dreams that turn into loneliness, Still drifting on this wave, Somehow all I can do is hang on clinging for each breath that hurts deep within my chest, Pain seeps into my mind, Still I go on barely able to reach for the lifesaver, but reaching I still clasp on to this another day, Sadness clings onto me, clinging, clinging, tears invade my eyes, smiles behind the jaded scars, That not even a million bandages could cover, No one hears my cries, drowning in the boat, Far out to sea, with only God to salvage, the pieces that must be put back together, It's not always easy to gain your composure, So once again life goes on. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RoseBud~ Found this little thing drifting aimlessly about~ Sad little thing it is~ Nicely done~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
you need to find that lifejacket and keep it on! |
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Twilight Myst Member
since 2001-10-04
Posts 58Just A Myst At Twilight |
This is so sad, it just tugs at my heart so!! Beautifully written, and I hope you find that lifejacket too... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
The sea of life is hard. You are not alone. We are here with you. I hope you find a peaceful shore. A really lovely outpour. Hugs! Sincerely, Regina |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
A sad one! Our journeys of life are never easy but hang on and keep the faith! Hugs, ~Marie~ |
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ynotme? Junior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 17 |
Hi rosebud..remember me? I used to be notlikely2 and now I'm ynotme? I have missed our little tete a tetes I missed our sexy verse But most of all I missed our passion and that is so much worse |
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