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Expectation Precipitation
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Expectation Precipitation |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
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I feel the clouds Go passing by Feel them shift Hear them sigh Heavy , thick Slow to proceed I notice And take heed Dark and foreboding With premonition form Displaying signs Of impending storm Almost there Almost here Not quite afraid It’s not quite fear Hushed awe I do maintain Waiting, watching For the rain ~SEA~ "One of the hardest things in life is having words in your heart that you |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Don't be standing out there if you get lightning - but short of that - enjoy some spuddlin'... Nice job, Susan..  |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A ponderous weight, these clouds of yours....well done! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Storms have a way of affecting moods...I enjoyed this read...I can see the clouds in my mind now. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love the rain also...ours will come in a day or two..*s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Sea. it's raining here and quite cool and damp. (of course it's damp Nancy...it's raining, duh!)lol. Me thinks it makes for good writing weather.  ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
rain falls on our SEA lightly caressing, soothing calming all her fears Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Susan, You need to move to Seattle, where it rains all the time. LOL! Great work! (((hugs)))Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Nan~ I'll be careful LOL thanks Sunshine~ thank you Magnus~ I love the rain, glad you could see my storm clouds thank you Wynter~ thank you Nancy~ the rain is healing gotta love it thanks Interloper~ wish me pitter patter, drip drops thank you Michael~ I'd love it there I'm sure! So soothing....  thank you (((HUGS)))~SEA "One of the hardest things in life is having words in your heart that you |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
SEA, It's nice to see an appreciation for the rain. Especially when it's understood. Nice job. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Super...SEA. Nothing like rain in the offing. Excellent. Bob |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
I love to hear rain patter my window. Great poem! As my borough has always stated- Do or Die. |
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