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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-10-03 02:58 PM

sunset, beckon moon
so in full soon man shall dance
swift call to romance

~*~

star light star bright O
greet me with your winsome light
bring my love to me

~*~

beneath moon and stars
lighting ways for lovers all
romance mesmerize

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 10-03-2001).]

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2001-10-03 03:00 PM

star light star bright O
greet me with your winsome light
bring my love to me

This one says it all Karilea. Beautiful
words from a beautiful soul. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-10-03 03:00 PM

ah courting the moon are we? Nicely done..softly romantic and longing with such a hopeful sense... as usual... very nicely done

Logan
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since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

3 posted 2001-10-03 03:21 PM

Very nice, very tender, Sis..very gentle smile

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-10-03 03:28 PM

Well done. Now for a nap

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2001-10-03 04:05 PM

Oh, that was so pretty!

~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2001-10-03 04:23 PM

Lovely!

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2001-10-03 04:47 PM

Karilea~

These senryus are so soft, charming and romantic - you KNOW they're right up my alley!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

sunshinemist
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since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

8 posted 2001-10-03 06:21 PM

Karilea,

Lovely and so romantic.

hugs, Marie

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

9 posted 2001-10-03 10:56 PM

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2001-10-04 06:48 AM

Karilea~
Oh so lovely~
Me lika very, very much~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

11 posted 2001-10-21 07:33 AM

Thank you everyone...Lunatic had inspired me so of course the pen wandered around, but looking for words in the dark is not always easy, so I was grateful for Cheshire's beaming grin....

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

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The Shores of Alone

12 posted 2001-10-21 02:16 PM

Perfect little gems of moonlight and romance.
Sandra

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

13 posted 2001-10-21 02:26 PM

Very beautiful, Karilea! Lovely!

DawnG

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since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

14 posted 2001-10-21 08:23 PM

Sunshine,

Very soft and romantic senryus you have posted here.

Dawn

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

15 posted 2001-10-21 08:36 PM

(smiles) Sooooooo beautiful and romantic, sweet Karilea! (big hugggssssss) You are such a beautiful romantic; your words always make our hearts sing! (sigh) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet sunshine, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

16 posted 2001-10-22 07:34 AM

Just this once I'm not gonna get "inspired" to write a senryu about my favorite subject, but you are pushing my buttons hard, ya lil Sunshine girl - pushing them very hard. You KNOW I get to thinking about kitties when you write these sweet senryus. But I think I'll just go back and read these sweet lines again and be a good boy.

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

17 posted 2001-10-22 10:05 AM

*sigh* absolutely beautiful. I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

18 posted 2001-10-22 10:10 AM

A lovely poem. Thank you for sharing.

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

19 posted 2001-10-27 03:13 AM

Karilea-
   These are beautiful.
   I'm liking them muchly.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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