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Toy boy |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Play with me I don’t mind as long as we both have a copy of the playbill It’s not a script I’ll read from but more the words that you’ll entertain Meet me at recess I’ll push while you swing |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Now that's an invitation a certain young lady I know is not going to pass up.  |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
oh how delightful it would be to meet you on the edge of free, the playground just a fantasy, the love of life enduringly....... oh how i wish this verse for me, someone to want to remedy the serious of life's hard truth while falling back in love with youth.... a lovely verse you've penned my friend, next time please call and i will play.... tonight, i'm off to sleep and then tomorrow 's promise of a day will wake me up to songs of birds....... and play, i will, enjoying words, since Life is short, horizons call.... the fun of living is our All....!! (loved your verse... thanks for posting this, sweet Duncan) |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Recess? Push me on a swing? Why I can’t thing of anything That’d make a school day so much fun And if you chase me I won’t run Push me higher, I’m not scared (though I may be slightly weird) Then we’ll smoke out in the yard And who said school days were so hard? If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
you have no idea how much this inspired me...I will write a "response" I hope you don't mind! Thank you for this! [This message has been edited by The Lady of Shallot (edited 10-20-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!!Very well done. A romantic invitation if I have ever seen one.  I am sure she will accept...how could anyone refuse to be pushed on swings. I am a dreamer and used to spend hours on swings daydreaming. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Such a sweet poem that expresses so so much! (big hugggssssss) Your beautiful words are always so soft and whimsical! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Duncan~ LOL ! Too, too clever~ Just a swingin' ~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you can push me on the swings any day the merry go round is nice too  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes! After the swings...take us on the carousel....please...all of us??!! Bet she meets you by the swings. Good write, Nancy ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This is very cute...recess....hummmmmm? That is a good idea...I like it. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
wanted to come back and thank you again for this, the reason it meant so much to me is because several weeks ago I was in an accident and am temporarily in a wheelchair but I hope to be swinging by spring! Thank you again. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
whimsical write o yuh! |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Duncan, Cute write here. Not sure any lady can refuse this invitation. Dawn |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Oh yes, she met him by the swings At recess, yes, the very thing And though you know that she was shy So gently did he push her high She giggled and they had such fun And if he chased, she didn’t run If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Duncan, You tease, you. Fun write! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Hey toyboy, that sounds like fun. Reminds me of Kamasutra, sensual in its own way and such a cute invitation.  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very cute. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Duncan- I'm loving this! Can we go swing NOW? Can we, huh?? Enjoyed this muchly! Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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