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Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-09-28 09:17 PM

Capture.

Capture the heart of hunger and pain
Feel for only a moment the strain
The lost endure as they survive

Capture the sadness of the child
Cast aside for a few seconds
Your happiness, try to understand
Why the sadness, why the loneliness

Capture the butterfly, fallen
Hold it in your hand
Its wing you should mend
For if it flies again

You have captured an image
Releasing the oppressed from rage
Allowing smiles to gain momentum
Helped a child to regain freedom
On the wings of a butterfly

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-09-28 09:35 PM

DJD~ very gently done

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-09-29 04:36 AM

JD~
Quite nice~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-09-30 01:53 PM

captured, yet free. . .

a powerful image here. . . well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

4 posted 2001-09-30 02:02 PM

Yes.....
Capture them all
and set them free
for that how it would be

A powerful write.....I really enjoyed it.

Thank you
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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2001-09-30 02:03 PM

I love the images here. Excellent poem, much enjoyed.
Sandra

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

6 posted 2001-09-30 02:13 PM

this powerful and beautiful...this would also make a great song.....very good work.....Daniel....I really like this!

Nathan

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

7 posted 2001-09-30 03:13 PM

nice work, Daniel.

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"

"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2001-09-30 05:43 PM

enjoy

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

9 posted 2001-09-30 06:59 PM

Tender, yet powerful Daniel ... very nicely written.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

10 posted 2001-09-30 09:36 PM

And you have captured the feeling very well in this piece. Very well done

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

11 posted 2001-10-05 11:51 AM

glad that I captured this beauty!!!!

Charisma

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