Open Poetry #16 |
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...Sun's Blessed Morning... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
morning moon sleep now solitary star shall soothe singing lullabies ~*~ morning star so blessed to see both orbs in your realm kiss them both for me ~*~ daybreak greeting night a shift of timing through space bless us quietly [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 10-03-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ I love this~ 'morning star so blessed to see both orbs in your realm kiss them both for me' Such a comforting thought~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
yes, very comforting... regards to you Karilea, Sudhir |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
watching the full moon over the pararie again? nicely done.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, You shine bright today. *L* |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wonderful haikus! ![]() I love the alliteration in the first, well done! Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
You have captured our morning greeting so eloquently. Would you not also speak of our evening waltz as we invite you earth dwellers to rest and recreate? Let thy moon arise. William Blake |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Beautifully shining today you are Sunshine. Wonderful write. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge, thank you so much for picking out a favored verse... and regards to you, Sudhir...it is good to see your name again... Captain...always....thank you.... Seymour, I try to light when I can...thank you my friend... Melybee, thank you so much... Lunatic, I shall see what the moon will bring... Thank you Gentle Spirit...I am always glad when you can come in to read... |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ooops, BTTT ![]() |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sushine..so lovely, you and your poetry! |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Such beautiful sunshine dawns across your beautiful words, sweet Karilea! (smiles) The lullabies and spirit of daylight sing in your heart, sweet friend! I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet sunshine, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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