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Her Measured Worth
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Her Measured Worth |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Like a runaway train her life has gone round corners too fast always afraid it is now or never hesitant couldn’t describe her the threat of unworthiness hovering like a cloud, her smile was ever present, her demeanor always serene her charming poise said to be her best asset, she dared never to over speak. Polite howdoyoudo’s, than listen attentively taken to altar by the first man with whom she shared her passion she slept in the false contentment of “this is how it is meant to be” an imaginary “white picket fence” aligning the rounded bushes adorning the circular drive confirmed her contentment startled by the stirring of feelings unknown to her, she was only more intrigued by the handsome stranger coming to discover her passion was more than she had ever known, she fell in love with the man who awakened the woman inside believing she is measured by the love of others she feels so lost at his turning from her now…. achildsheart 10-25-01 Look into the eyes of a man and you will find the soul of the woman who loves him... [This message has been edited by A Whisper's Caress (edited 10-25-2001).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
believing she is measured by the love of others she feels so lost at his turning from her now…. If we are measured by love, perhaps it should be our love for others. Sad but very well written. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very real write. In a way saying that the other man's grass is not always greener....or, prince charming could turn out to be a frog. Not sure what I just said, but I know what I meant.  Hugs, Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
A Whisper's Caress, I too feel I my worth is only measured by others love. Very powerful read for me. Dawn |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Annie, this is so sos ad but so beautiful! (sigh) I believe that the more love we give, the more we get, and in measuring love, it's how together we learn to love, and all the joy and understanding that comes when hearts touch! (sigh) Wonderful, sweet friend, you always write so beautifully! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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