Open Poetry #16 |
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Passion's Plea |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az ![]() |
Passion's Plea ![]() Just one more dance is my plea To fulfill my every need Passion to the highest degree Won't you please come dance with me? Cpalmer God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Cindi~ Well said in few words....and whew! I love that picture! ![]() Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Wow! That should be music to your lovers ears. Brevity at its finest. Well done. Larry C |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Melissa, Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! ![]() hugs Cindi |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Larry, Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it...the feel of passion in words is so fun! Hugs Cindi |
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Kirksters Junior Member
since 2001-07-01
Posts 47 |
Excellent poem, you said a lot with so few words. lyl |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
who could turn down such an invitation? Very nicely done... |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
one more dance of passion? lovely thought.... May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cindi~ Very nice~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Kirksters, Thank you sweets! LYL Cindi Cpat, I hope no one would turn down and invitation like that! thanks Cindi Marge, Thank you I'm glad you like it! Hugs back! Cindi Whisper Thank you so much! Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Cindi- Well, you already know I like this one. Nicely done. ![]() Love ya, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Vicky, Thank you, your oppinion always means so much to me! Love ya Cindi |
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