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Open Poetry #16

You're So Lucky

Topheth
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

0 posted 2001-10-03 03:41 PM

You don't look away when she's talking,
and you better keep up if she's walking.
You take your medicine even if sour,
and you're ready for her at any hour.

You don't let the grass grow too wild,
and you never treat her as a child.
She owns it all and nothing's yours;
You get dick (but that's also hers)!

       On that razor's edge, if you make a slip,
       she'll cut you from her life.
       It takes a while for the bleeding to stop
       but she still holds the knife.

You better work harder to provide,
she isn't someone to be denied.
And all her temper-tantrums are cute,
so learn to enjoy them and stay mute.

About those boys, they're just good friends,
and that hug and kiss?  That's where it ends.
So listen close, it's important and true:
You're so lucky she's still with you.

       On that razor's edge, if you make one slip,
       she'll cut you from her life.
       It takes a while for the bleeding to stop
       and she still holds the knife.

[This message has been edited by Topheth (edited 10-03-2001).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-10-03 03:47 PM

she sounds really mean.....you don't need that.....

Topheth
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

2 posted 2001-10-03 03:53 PM

Actully, I like to consider it an open letter to whomever next has the pleasure of my ex-wife. LOL

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-10-03 03:57 PM

oh I see, she must have been friends with my ex LOL he'd be great for her (actually I wouldn't wish him on my worst enemy)

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