Truly Blessd (my first sonnet)

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rosepetals25

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0 posted 2001-10-02 12:24 PM

Truly Blessed

My heart rests in the safety of your palm.
I knew I loved you from the very start.
I find my trust in you does make me calm
And with that love I give you all my heart.

I am truly blessed from heaven above
I want to hold your body close to mine
And forever in my heart keep this love
Feeling our souls completely intertwine

Your sweet love has inspired my very soul
You’ve given me a rare and precious gift
Every doubt and fear you can console
Forever hand in hand through life we'll drift

I have been waiting my whole life for you
To your heart I will never be untrue.

I have to give a thank you to Michael.. aka Auguste. I couldn't have done it without him. Thank you for your help

I need a darn quote. *chuckles*

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 10-02-2001).]

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

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Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2001-10-02 12:26 PM

Wow! Tara, not only did you pen a perfect sonnet, but, it is so beautiful!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

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By the sea

2 posted 2001-10-02 12:40 PM

I actually gave Tara very little help. This lovely sonnet belongs to her. Wonderful work, my friend. *hugs*

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 529

3 posted 2001-10-02 12:52 PM

wow.
let me just say,
wow.
i love you too honey.
um.
i thought you didn't write stuff that rhymed?
hmmmmmmm.
wow anyway.
-Napalm, who loves you very much

I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!
"Why do i smell something burning?!?"
I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!

rosepetals25

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4 posted 2001-10-02 01:02 AM

Melissa - Thank you for stopping in

I've been wanting to do a sonnet for awhile now

I'm glad you liked it.

Michael - You helped me write this.. you helped me rhyme and get the flow.. you deserve some of the credit and I thank you

Dave - I'm glad you liked it. Pssst.. in case you haven't guessed... this poem is about you

I love you too

I need a darn quote. *chuckles*

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 10-02-2001).]

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

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5 posted 2001-10-02 06:23 PM

great job rp. . . you have done well. . . the flow is great and your rhymes are well chosen. . .

I wish I could do as well. . .

oh. . . and I'll see if I can find a quote for you!!

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2001-10-02 07:26 PM

wonderful and your special one's response makes it show how true love should be... *s

happiness always to you both

~Wynter

rosepetals25

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7 posted 2001-10-02 10:37 PM

Sven - Thank you for your kind words. I'm am 100% positive you would do amazing at sonnets with your talent. And yes please...

.. find me a quote!!! *chuckles*

nakdthoughts - Thank you for stopping in

And my wonderful love makes love so easy

I need a darn quote. *chuckles*

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 10-02-2001).]

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

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8 posted 2001-10-03 08:46 AM

My heart rests in the safety of your palm.
I knew I loved you from the very start.
I find my trust in you does make me calm
And with that love I give you all my heart.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Lovely first sonnet!

Deb

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2001-10-03 08:50 AM

RosePetals~
Just lovely~
Form and content~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

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10 posted 2001-10-03 11:25 AM

this is a wonderfully honest warm sonnet!

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"

"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

sunshinemist
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since 2001-09-29

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11 posted 2001-10-03 01:52 PM

RosePetals,

An excellent sonnet. Congratulations. Well done!

Hugs, Marie

Topheth
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since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

12 posted 2001-10-03 02:45 PM

Beautiful sonnet - quite enjoyed!

Auguste

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By the sea

13 posted 2001-10-03 05:36 PM

Hi,
Hope you don't mind me sending this up again.

Such nice work!

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

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