Open Poetry #16 |
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Reaquainted With Iambe |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I cleaned up And changed clothes when I got home Enjoyed the familiar And marveled at how strange it was For it to be strange… Iambe walked in about 6:00 Not saying a word She stripped off her overalls Letting them fall to the floor. Walking past me And managed to just brush my arm With the tips of her breast as she passed. I heard her turn the shower on So I walked into the kitchen And made myself a pot of coffee. When she came out I remembered the lust she built in me But sat there not saying anything Watching her walk towards me Her first words struck me “ You Fool, you poor stupid fool.” I rose from my chair And nodded just before I turned And walked out the door to my truck I heard her laugh as I turned the key. Wish I had poured the coffee into a thermos. |
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Lady In White![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
And he leaves again for who knows how long...perhaps when he stops for that first cup, more than the story shall see a fork in the road... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well, I don't blame him a bit for leaving! Of all the nerve calling him a fool!!! Good for him!!! ~Nancy~ |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I think you should go back, pour the coffee in the thermos and get things settled, laid to rest ![]() But I don't write about lambe, you do ... and so well my friend. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I was confused when I read 'Toasting Fools', thinking I must have missed a chapter and so I had. I was really hoping for a happier ending. At least now I understand your explanation in previous post. It's odd how wrapped up I got in those two people. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
ah Duncan, the Captain has written of Iambe before, do a search of the archives, and you shall be pleasantly surprised.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
So lambe was out til 6:00 a.m. worrying this guy half to death and when she walks in she calls him a fool...I feel like I lived this story...a thousand times...with the same woman...James |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Yes, that touch brushin by, is why bein' a guy is okay sometimes. ![]() Loved this, Ron. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
![]() "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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