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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2001-10-01 02:09 PM

Iambe laughed at my dance

I smiled at her,
Nodded my head
And stopped dancing

She walked towards me
Still a question in her eyes
so I bent down,
Picked up my beer
And watched her hips sway
Under the overalls

Bob pulled in about then
his old Dodge backfiring
when he turned the key.

Iambe turned to face him,
I walked to my truck,
Slid behind the wheel and turned the key.

She fired on the second turn.

As I eased out of the drive
I didn't look back,
I was thinking about home
And knew if she wanted to be there
She would show up

If she didn't
I knew I did.

Memories of a night with cactus
And my own demons came to mind
as I thought about how being lost
Was just a state of mind

I was no longer lost in myself
But I was still lost in Iambe

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-10-01 02:11 PM

I wonder if she will follow her senses, or if she will take a quarter from her overalls and flip it....

decisions, decisions....

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2001-10-01 02:15 PM

Cpat Hair,
Interesting read.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2001-10-01 02:17 PM

Each one is getting better and better. I keep telling myself to save them for when I get home tonight...but I have no self control. I think I may be getting lost in her, too.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-10-01 02:46 PM

Another good story, enjoyed.
Sandra

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-10-01 02:59 PM

Ron, she sure does get around ... in your mind

Well done once again and I thoroughly enjoyed the read.

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

6 posted 2001-10-01 03:06 PM

Will she show up? I wonder.
Once again, I'm enjoying this

more more!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2001-10-01 05:08 PM

I almost missed this one...went out to my garden when he was dancing, came back in to find her laughing at his dance? Was it that funny? What was he doing, the bird dance? Hummm...what next?? Come on...tell us!!
I'm loving these!! She must be something mighty special. ~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

8 posted 2002-09-26 02:04 PM

Cactus and agave-soaked ponderin's here.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2005-05-10 02:46 PM

"still lost in Iambe"

*nodding*

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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