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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-09-30 01:45 PM

It might have been forever
that I thought of him
with pain, and love and memories.
Ah, the memories
every one etched into a corner of my heart
lying amidst the broken pieces
almost as though
they were the holding glue.

It might have been forever
that I loved him lone
and yet, through sands of time
and heartfelt dreams
perhaps a few more memories
can be made
to hold me together later
when I am alone again.

And in that quest for love
which provides only memories
there may come a time
when the memories become overshadowed
by the present
because it will be better
and he will still be here
with me.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-09-30 01:45 PM

we can only hope my friend. . . we can only hope. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

2 posted 2001-09-30 01:55 PM

Very nice poem...thanks for sharing!!

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

3 posted 2001-09-30 01:58 PM

And in that quest for love
which provides only memories
there may come a time
when the memories become overshadowed
by the present
because it will be better
and he will still be here
with me.

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I hope that time would come ....and the present would overshadow the memories....

Lovely and heartfelt....

Thank you
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sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

4 posted 2001-09-30 02:47 PM

Catalinamoon, very beautiful poem straight from the heart. Much enjoyed.

~Marie~

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2001-09-30 08:07 PM

i hope so too hugss..enjoyed Sandra

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

6 posted 2001-09-30 08:20 PM

~It will be better Sandra. I enjoy reading your beautiful heart. *Peace you.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

7 posted 2001-09-30 11:01 PM

What a lovely write as always Sandra.

And in that quest for love
which provides only memories
there may come a time
when the memories become overshadowed
by the present

Here's hoping the present does overshadow the memories for you my friend

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

8 posted 2001-09-30 11:12 PM

This was a very heartfelt poem, well done indeed.

~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

9 posted 2001-10-01 05:30 AM

we all need to love and beloved
and you have expressed that beautifully
Arthur

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