Open Poetry #16 |
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The Golden Box |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada ![]() |
![]() ~*~ The Golden Box ~*~She held the box in her trembling hands, as her heart fluttered in remembrance of a love consummated in truth and trust. Saddened at the recollections of years past, of a bond of love that had been so secured, the moon and stars shone in unison to brighten every night of their magical love. Her mind’s eye remembered passion’s breath on her skin, and how his smile soothed her soul. His very essence ran through her veins. Theirs was to be a love everlasting that moved earth, heaven and stars. He had said they were two hearts, Beating as one metronome of an eternal love. Her tears began to fall, and sting her skin with the memories. His one indiscretion had violated her trust. Her heart had shattered in an instant. She had made a choice, for without trust there was nothing. Shrinking from the loneliness of that choice she opened the box. Shivering in anticipation, she picked one, frayed at the edge. Just one of many love letters read over and over again. As they were now all she had, Of what was never meant to be. ~*~ Art: John W. Waterhouse (1849-1917) Psyche Opening the Golden Box (1903) http://www.primenet.com/~byoder/artofjw.htm midi: Once Upon A December http://angelwinks.webby.com/MidiSoundBoothPC.html ~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly |
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bonnie1961 Junior Member
since 2001-09-30
Posts 44ny, usa |
that was just beautiful! you are a very talented writer |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Much enjoyed this tender journey of remembrance Sharon, very nicely written. ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Mysteria, Very beautiful poem, much enjoyed. Ah, love! Sometimes they slip through our fingers. Warm smiles, ~Marie~ ![]() |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I love this, one of my favorite artworks, and what a perfect poem to go with. Sandra |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful story, Sharon. You know, this one reminds of the book "The Christmas Box" by Richard Paul Evans. It's a wonderful story if you're not familiar with it, I bet you'd love it. Great work! ![]() All writing comes |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Golden box, With a golden key that locks, Emotion, Unwritten, Till you opened with your heart, And gave part. Gloom |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Awww,geez, Mysteria, what a wonderful write, hmm, got a spare kleenex? need to wipe my glasses of course..sigh....very gentle smile |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Mysteria, this is just a fantastic poem. I like the imaginative lines, just beautiful. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sharon, this is oh so beautiful. I wanted to rush to the end to see if she opened the box...wow. Such emotions I am feeling! It did remind me as Lone Wolf stated, the story of The Christmas Box. You are talented indeed. ~warm hugs, Nancy~
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sharon, this is very beautiful writing...and, as always, a wonderful presentation ![]() |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Gee whiz, thank you everyone for your wonderful comments. I saw this art today, and had to write around it somehow. I have not read the Christmas Box but I will now, and PG sometimes you are too smart ![]() ![]() |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
Soooo very sad, but so eloquently written, as yours always are. With such grace and beauty words flow from your pen that reach out and touch our hearts in the deepest places...this is yet another example of that. Love ya muches, always, ~*~dawn~*~
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Dawn ~ Thank you for your kind words, glad that you liked this one. |
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