Open Poetry #16 |
Night themes |
paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Soft velvet Darkness on the land Nights caress Starlight shines A carpet of gems Sky treasures Night time fears Go bump in the night robbing sleep Dreams flow by Pictures in the mind Saying much Rest in sleep Restoring your body Till the morn |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is really nice, things that go bump in the night still freak me out LOL |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Oooh..I like. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Paladin....excellent indeed. This has great imagery....and I love this style. Enjoyed.
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Thank you for all your wonderfull comments.It is my desire in these themes to present a sketch book of images and thoughts.Think if these as possible seeds for longer poems. paladin |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
wonderful! I love the night..although I don't recall sleeeping so much at night because of my writing! LOL! Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I liked reading this....very lovely! Nathan |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
paladin~ mm...you're making me sleepy These were lovely hugs, ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Planting seeds for Halloween, are we? Things that go bump in the night are things I lock up the closet with the witch's broom. I smell an interesting cauldron brewing here. |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
i like it because it leaves so much to the reader's imagination... cool style. |
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