Open Poetry #16 |
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Cameron |
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Phantaza New Member
since 2001-09-17
Posts 3Cape Cod, Massachusetts ![]() |
I hate the angels for being jealous of me For taking you away; why didn't they see? The dreams that we shared feel crumbled and lost All that we'd give up no matter the cost So hard to get up and face everyday Knowing that you are not doing the same In dreams you will visit In my heart you'll live on But all that still hurts for I know you are gone Not here to confide in Not here to give love It all seems so different for you are so far above Against all odds we stood together Although at times it all seemed so rough It always worked out because you loved me enough To stand by me always To hold my hand when I was scared To face any challenge that I was dared To some it seems over In my eyes begun For in my heart we will never be done |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I didn't know Cameron, Sarah - but you certainly have given me a personal look at him... Thanks for sharing this here... ![]() |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is such a touching tribute to your love. Wonderfully written. I'm sure he hears it. |
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Elizabeth![]() ![]()
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Sorry to hear about your loss, Sarah. ![]() God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Phantaza~ This is just awfully sad ... I'm so sorry for your loss~ Welcome to Passions~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so sad. Sorry to hear about your loss. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Phantaza- A very emotional and touching write. I'm so sorry for your loss. You've penned the heartache well. Welcome to Passions. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
A wonderful tribute. So sorry for your loss. The ending was a beautiful way to wrap this piece up. Welcome to Passions. ~Krissie "No one has ever loved |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
And each time you look up at the sky may you see him waving hi, not goodbye. I am so sorry. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 10-03-2001).] |
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