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Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2001-10-01 11:59 AM

believe it or not
trust me on this!
the heavier the music,
the calmer I breathe,
the darker the road,
the better I see,
the farther the post,
the nearer I feel

my head is spinning
like a spring wanting to uncoil,
the wise name this nature
as wants and desires

questions hang their long faces
posing in front of mirrors,
reflecting on reasons for
why birds celebrate the birth of blue
and the mixing of the yellow
by their synchronised chirping,
the wise name this nature
as life and happy admire

yet, I am appeased only by
deafening sounds of thunder
slower melodies evoke
forbidden memories

photography is a good hobby
as good as any other one
but make sure that you do not
take pictures of the one you love
because love won't last more
than some of the photographs
the wise name this nature
as evil deed of technology

well, I prefer black to colour,
dark to light and night to day,
clarity of vision erases a blur
of the unforgettable divide

-!-

hello, my friends, it's been a while. I have come here just to pass my regards with this one, which is the only thing I have written in more than a few months. The river, I think, has truly run dry.

Thanks for being you,
Regards to all,
Sudhir

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-10-01 12:01 PM

Sir.. I doubt the river dry... the current smay have moved beneath the surface, but the river still lives.

Nicely written piece...I enjoyed.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-10-01 12:19 PM

in gully of dry
lives a quiet well
beneath the rock
the tides still swell
soon to come
pouring forth
I've set my sail
you set the course...

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

3 posted 2001-10-01 12:29 PM

how can the river be dry when you are writing such as this...?

enjoyed..
hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"all you need is someone you can hold..dont be sad, youre not alone..i will be here for you..." mwsmith

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-10-01 08:02 PM

indeed my friend. . . the river is never dry. . . just some times, it's a trickle. . .

well done Sir. . . good to see you again. . .

----------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2001-10-01 08:06 PM

Hello, Sudhir! Good to see you again, my friend

The river is not dry....you are just in de Nile

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 10-01-2001).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2001-10-01 08:12 PM

From the sound of this beautiful poem
the well is indeed not dry.
Well done and enjoyed ...hope to see more from you.
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2001-10-01 08:50 PM

The river is not dry
when you write words
that make us cry
for more.

And black absorbs all colors
of the spectrum.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

8 posted 2001-10-02 02:54 AM

Gentlemen and fair ladies!
My dear friends,
Thanks a great deal for your belief.

Hopefully, what looks dry is not barren, and I do intend to correct the correctables, collect the collectables, and tread on. All of you will see more of me and I will see more of you. That's certain.

Regards to all and thanks once again,
Sudhir

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

9 posted 2001-10-02 06:37 AM

"well, I prefer black to colour,
dark to light and night to day,
clarity of vision erases a blur
of the unforgettable divide"

Wonderful to see you again Sudhir! Fear not, for your river could never run dry my friend ... and this is proof positive. Lovely to see you posting again!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

10 posted 2001-10-02 12:23 PM

it's so good to see you here again, Sudhir, hope you are well.

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"

"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

11 posted 2001-10-03 03:07 AM

Kit and Kathleen,

Thank you very much for your kind words.

Regards,
Sudhir

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