Open Poetry #16 |
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My Friend |
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oh2beme Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 215NV USA ![]() |
My Friend Take my hand and walk with me, Till rainbow’s end my eyes doth see. A light ahead in the tunnels end, Stay with me my kind, dear friend. Don’t lead me astray or cause me grief, A lifetime with friends is all to brief. The troubles we know, good times we share, Always knowing the other is there. To comfort sorrows or put a smile on one’s face. For it’s you, my friend, I could never replace. No matter how long or brief it has been, It is you, my angel, that I call my friend Please stay with me, don’t ever leave, Mine one true friend....this I believe. |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
How nice this was! I'll be your friend : ) Your true friend I will be Any favor you need count on me Through good and not so good times Through snow, rain, or sunshine I am your friend and you are mine! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
What a great poem to write for your friend! |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Fine tribute. Who could survive without their friend? Very nice. Larry C |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this belongs on a greeting card. . . I love it. . . ![]() well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love this and had the same thought as Sven..a perfect card for a dear friend... *s ~Wynter |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a wonderfully genuine tribute to a dear friend oh2beme... this is simply heartwarming, very much enjoyed! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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oh2beme Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 215NV USA |
I think I'm going to cry (Sven can I use your shoulder?) Thank you all so very much for the kind words. I never expected such response from this and I do thank you all!!!!!! Sven....this card goes out to you for being such a dear dear man.... ![]() |
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