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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

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Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2001-09-26 08:23 PM

Soulmate Sky

Among the stars I shall find you
'cross the sky of buttercup blue,
my angel, my once in a lifetime
you are my prince come true,
through the rush of the wind's sigh
sun and moon weep with jealousy
as God's tears shower us
with the promise of eternal ecstasy

The world will be ours for a moment
as earth and space caress to align
'tis true love at first sight,
you are my gift from fated time,
heaven's breath shall unfold
within the vibrant flame of your kiss
electric lips shall anoint me
with heart-enveloping bliss

My kindred lover, I'm yours
through the hum of soulmate sky
making love on the breeze
to destiny's purest lullaby,
and to the drum of butterfly wings
our spirits will mesh into one,
at dawn, we'll be husband and wife
'neath the blessing of passion sun

By Melissa P. Monette

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-09-26 08:24 PM

wow. . . the depths of your heart amaze me my friend. . .

a work of love from The Queen of Romance. . . wonderfully done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-09-26 08:29 PM

Melissa...This is very very beautiful !!
How romantic! Thank you for sharing.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

3 posted 2001-09-26 08:47 PM

Melissa,

So enchantedly beautiful! Sheesh girl you can write

How lucky for us all you are willing to share your talent

I love this!

TaraB

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Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

4 posted 2001-09-26 08:57 PM

This is heavenly in it's beauty. What an amazing way with words you have. Applause, applause, applause.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2001-09-26 09:42 PM

Thank you Sven, Enchantress, Tara and Tracey!

Someone sent me this picture and then this poem just poured out of me!

Ain't the fantasy of love, grand?!

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

6 posted 2001-09-26 10:13 PM

This is absolutely one of the best poems I've ever read! I mean, this is so superbly written, and the images are outstanding...excellent, excellent job, Melissa...I'm keepin' this FOR SURE...

sp

tried to write a letter
to tell you how I feel,
but all I kept on writing
was slipping on the tears from the day...

Chelsea~
Member

since 2001-02-09

Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2001-09-27 10:51 AM

missy

this is incredibly
beautiful,
you know who I'm
gonna show this to

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

8 posted 2001-09-27 11:40 AM

My kindred lover, I'm yours
through the hum of soulmate sky
making love on the breeze
to destiny's purest lullaby,
and to the drum of butterfly wings
our spirits will mesh into one,
at dawn, we'll be husband and wife
'neath the blessing of passion sun
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you KNEW I would love this one

my oh my Melis...you are indeed the Queen of Romance...just beautifuln girlie-girl...
your talent for imagery is show cased in this.
very well done poetess Honeybee

Well tomorrow holds only mystery
And who's to say what might be
But in you I found a love so strong
The sun and the moon looked on in jealousy

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2001-09-27 12:34 PM

Melissa--gorgeous imagery and such a passionate intent in this lovely poem.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2001-09-27 12:59 PM

Melissa,
I'm impressed. You sure got my attention. *L*

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

11 posted 2001-09-27 01:06 PM

Melissa~ this is so romantic

I loved the way this felt while reading!

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

12 posted 2001-09-27 02:25 PM

Sigh...just one word... WOW!

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

13 posted 2001-09-27 04:58 PM

I love this..although linoleum is quite interesting too! LOL! Just kidding!

Nice critique flag!

Seriously, this was simply awesome! I love your poetry!

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

14 posted 2001-09-27 04:59 PM

Melissa,
Be still my heart, Yet another Romantic masterpiece, YOU RULE!
Peace and (((HUGZ))) my friend, Dennis

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 529

15 posted 2001-09-29 09:41 PM

beautiful poem with wonderful imagery (runs out of superlatives) very, very cool. i like it.

i wish nothing but evil on Fabio, though.

heh.
-Napalm

I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!
"Why do i smell something burning?!?"
I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

16 posted 2001-09-29 09:47 PM

Melissa - I stopped by, read this writing and was very touched. Your pen expresses the warmth in your heart. And the picture is exquisite... I would love to learn how to post this pictures with some of my poems...

BC

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Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

17 posted 2001-09-29 11:24 PM

Melissa, this was so romantic, but I pray that you do not get "Fabxx" in your Christmas stocking LOL, and that he looks a tad different than our hero here. Sometime I will tell you about my experience with the string of "Fabxx's" I have run through. This was VERY romantic!

~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

18 posted 2001-09-30 09:15 PM

Melissa, you are on an ever more romantic streak. This is beautiful. Now is it true? Do you think?
Sandra

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

19 posted 2001-10-02 12:18 PM

Melissa...this is so beautiful....I hope to one day write this outstanding.thank you for sharing this
alan

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

20 posted 2001-10-02 12:32 PM

If only it were true!

Thank you all so much for your replies!

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

21 posted 2001-10-02 01:53 AM

Who could ever resist a love like that? Delightful. Hard to top a true romantic.
Larry C

Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either. larry c

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

22 posted 2001-10-02 03:06 AM

Exquisitely romantic...

Wonderful reading you, Melissa.

Regards,
Sudhir

Balladeer

Administrator

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

23 posted 2001-10-02 04:57 PM

So where do I go to fill out an application??

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

24 posted 2001-10-03 09:30 PM

Larry and Sudhir - I'm glad you enjoyed this, thank you!

if a certain cutie patootie named Balladeer wants to send a resume, I'll accept it!

LOL!

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

25 posted 2001-10-05 10:23 AM

*wow*.......this is a keeper for sure...Fabulous write my friend.

Charisma

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

26 posted 2001-10-05 10:28 AM

Melissa - Thank goodness for this poem! By luck of draw I chose a lot of sad poems by you first. This poem, too, is sad because of your response to that rascally scalawag (I think I need not name him). Please do not blindly accept his resume - check his references and you will see that a Long John is a lot warmer than a 'Deer! heh

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

27 posted 2001-10-22 07:23 PM

Melissa,

Ohhhh this one has it ALL ... audio, visual and the words of fantasy romance ... sigh ... lovely just lovely!

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

28 posted 2001-10-27 04:50 AM

Melissa-
   This truly is a beautiful write.
   Much enjoyed this.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

DawnG

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since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

29 posted 2001-10-27 02:08 PM

Melissa,

Truly beautiful poem.

Dawn

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

30 posted 2001-10-27 02:36 PM

Wow.....such a beautiful beautiful piece....

with a breathtaking graphic and music.....

Melissa you have made my heart swing with this one....

You have such a wonderful pen , my friend that gives us such beautiful works....

{{{{hugs}}}}}
Thank you

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