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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2001-10-22 07:08 PM

Heartthrob Senyru
By: Noah Eaton
10/22/01

(These poems were inspired by my dear friends Melissa Honeybee and Catalinamoon) :-)

First Kiss

Rosy cheeks singing
In the joy of loves first kiss
Embracing heaven

Turquoise Rose

Blue as purity
Yet white as satin
The sweet rose you are

Gorgeous Kiss

Touching lips softly
Breathless in felicity
Tasting loves rapture

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2001-10-22 08:05 PM

Noah, these are beautiful!

Romance looks good on you

I love these!~

Take care,
Melissa~

p.s ~ the 2nd senryu is not 5-7-5 format, but, it's still lovely

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 10-22-2001).]

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

2 posted 2001-10-22 08:14 PM

Beautiful, very romantic.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-10-22 08:25 PM

Very beautiful, Noah. Yes, they do tend to inspirer us all.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (edited 10-22-2001).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-10-22 08:57 PM

Well done Noah!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2001-10-22 09:12 PM

Beautiful words, Noah, and I am proud to have any part in inspiring them
Sandra

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2001-10-22 09:20 PM

Pasionate words said
soulfull words caress their ears
romance comes your way
Nice Job Noah

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

7 posted 2001-10-22 11:46 PM

These are lovely Noah. Heart throbs are so lovely.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

8 posted 2001-10-22 11:50 PM

Noah,
Definately a heart throb...I'm sure you have every woman just wrapped around your finger! This is wonderful!
Hugs
Cindi

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2001-10-27 05:51 AM

Noah-
   Lovely pennings...enjoyed.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

10 posted 2001-10-27 02:39 PM

Noah,

You have such a romantic heart. Thank you for sharing your kisses with all of us.

Dawn

Wanda
Member

since 2001-10-23

Posts 461

11 posted 2001-10-27 02:48 PM

Noah; A lovely poem. I am glad these two ladies inspired this poem and you were able to share it with us. Thank you. Wanda

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