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Honeybee
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0 posted 2001-10-08 10:53 PM




I yearn to taste bliss
emblazoned across my heart
breathless for your kiss
consumed by fire and passion,
enraptured, am I of you






A love such as ours
cannot be defined by words
only by heartbeats






Surrender to love
kiss me for eternity
within fate's embrace

By Melissa P. Monette


© Copyright 2001 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2001-10-08 10:57 PM


Of course you already know you'll have to re-post this on Valentine's Day!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2001-10-08 11:01 PM


Melissa, OH...love sweet love!!!  Yes, you must repost in February.  I love this!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

Suetang
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3 posted 2001-10-08 11:17 PM


Melissa
You have captured the very essence of love and romance in this beautiful piece of writing.  Take care.......Sue

Suetang

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2001-10-08 11:32 PM


*bowing* to the queen ...
Melis..the goddess of romance...
tankas...senyru/haiku ... graphics and tunes  

Beautiful Melis-girlie ...
we love ya when your "stuck on love" *L*

As I have said before...Hallmark cards NEEDS you  

We're all feeding our lonely ... like it might go away,
Like the doors of heaven will swing wide ... if we just find the right words to say.

Dennis L. White
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5 posted 2001-10-09 11:49 AM


Melissa,
  I also bow to the extrodinary talents of the Queen of romance poetry (be still my heart).
Your words are magic in this often harsh and cruel world. If only more people could have your vision, this world would be a kinder, gentler place. Write On Friend, Dennis :^)

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2001-10-09 12:34 PM


Melissa,
Lovely, enjoyed them all.

Chelsea~
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7 posted 2001-10-09 07:55 PM


missy,

gurl, these are
beautiful!!!!!!!

Balladeer
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8 posted 2001-10-09 09:43 PM


OK! OK! You talked me into it!!!!!!!
Dark Angel
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9 posted 2001-10-10 12:01 PM


Beautiful Melissa, I enjoyed them all  

Maree

LoveLetters
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State of Hope
10 posted 2001-10-10 12:10 PM


Beautiful writing Miss Melissa!

Love has many masks. I am but one of them.

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11 posted 2001-10-10 12:25 PM


Now that was Romance with a capital R.  You better re-post in February Melissa, these were beautifully done.

~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~

Janette
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12 posted 2001-10-22 07:38 PM


These are so sweet and dripping with pure romantic love.

They made me smile and say ... Ahhhhhhhh!

Wonderful reads, you talent is immense!

Startime
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13 posted 2001-10-22 08:07 PM


Romance fills your heart and soul and then flows through your pen to bless us with it sweetness. I love them.  Keep sharing with us every beat of your passion filled heart that we may be enriched by your gentle spirit.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

vlraynes
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14 posted 2001-10-27 05:27 AM



Melissa-
   Very romantic pennings, my friend.
   Just lovely.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

DawnG
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15 posted 2001-10-27 02:28 PM


Mellissa,

These are so deliciously romantic. Will look forward to seeing them reposted for Valentines Day as well.

                           Dawn

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