Open Poetry #16 |
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Once Believed |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone ![]() |
I once believed in fairy tales and happily ever after I once believed in wishing stars and the joy I found in laughter I once believed in carpet rides soaring over moonlight filled nights I once believed in lovers truth while his arms made life feel so right I once believed my prince had come on his proverbial white steed I once believed in magic kiss now there's nothing left to believe. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Nothing to believe in anymore, No reason to walk the moonlight Or wade the wave at the shore, Nothing to make believing right. The world turns bland and tasteless, No smells of salty winds now blow, It’s something familiar like darkness Not believing is something I know Gloom |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
wow, this is really sad. um. so, since i'm just That Kind of Guy (tm) want me to find whoever this guy is and squeeze his neck until his head turns purple? failing that, i wish you nothing but the best - this poem is sad, but it demonstrates beautifully what a talent you truly have. i deeply enjoy reading your work. -Dave |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() (big hugggsssssss) This is so very sad, sweet Sandra, I've always believed in these things myself, then sometimes when I dream maybe I could take the hand of my lovely princess and ride with her into romance, my heart breaks and can't help but doubt if it'll come true and If I'll ever feel loves first kiss! (sigh) But I know deep down if you believe in yourself, your dreams will come true. Say to yourself, "I believe in magic, and I will find the prince of my dreams and live happily after after forever!". You deserve the most beautiful love, and I know with all my heart you will have your heart singing as the angels rejoice in your happiness! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet Sandra!!! (kiss on cheek) Hope you have a beautiful day! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I see this as a double-edged sword, sad if you have not found such treasures but if only, in my belief, and word ... happy that you understand love's measures. Once we experience something we believe in, it is no longer, it becomes known. Such as the magical kiss, once tasted you will know there is no more searching for something to believe in. This is what I see, hope its close to home. <<<<< ![]() Disneyland is a great place to visit don't you think Duncan ... a place where dreams can be made after all for some. [This message has been edited by ctowen (edited 11-13-2001).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Which is why we're all better off in Disneyland. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
We can still believe in you...for you are a lovely lady that will find someone special that really wants to be with you...James |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
So sad.......Yet so eloquently expressed. you have such a beautiful soul Sandra and it would surely help you survive it all. Take care... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Just because one man turned into a black knight doesn't mean they all are. Sweetie...hold on to dreams or when your shining knight comes along you might miss him. Put those stars back into you eyes. ***hugs*** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
for now you shall put away those dreams that led you astray the knight is not at your door but never fear, for ever more the dreams are yours, in hand you hold all your future, soon yours in gold... so do with those what you will give their lives a new fulfill and dreams shall once again come true for with a wink, I believe in you... |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
nicely written arthur |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
there's always something to believe my friend. . . in yourself. . . ![]() sad, but well written. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy ![]() |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Sandra, this is so sad. But, don't give up. And, always believe in yourself. |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, There's always dreams to dream and fairytales to believe in....KTDA...I know it's hard, but we must go on...... Beautiful poem... Love, Elise |
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