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Robert William Gruhn
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0 posted 2001-11-13 01:59 AM


To find your tomorrow
Follow me to mine
Cannot promise
What will be waiting

Still
Having plans
For that glorious day
Smiles creasing every face

Laughter singing
Like your favorite song
Where love
Will never lie again

Holding you
In truth's sweet embrace
Dreams no longer wishes
Wishes never needing hope

Hope no longer needed
Just tenderly thought of
An old friend
You once clung to

Having found my tomorrow
I need you there
For without you
It does not exist



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1 posted 2001-11-13 09:29 AM


*sigh* so very romantic, Sir Robert. I know she will be there for you and then you will rejoyce in all your tomorrows. Very beautiful poem, my friend. I love it.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-11-13 11:22 AM




(sigh) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend! (smiles) She will be there every tomorrow, and your love will make her happy forever! (sigh) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend! (big guggsgssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet brother, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-11-13 11:40 AM


Gosh Robert, those first two lines speak volumes. Please forgive for overlooking you, and welcome to Passions.
Zinsser
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4 posted 2001-11-15 12:18 PM


To find your tomarrow
Follow me to mine
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
beautiful.......

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5 posted 2001-11-15 02:25 AM


"To find your tomorrow
Follow me to mine
Cannot promise
What will be waiting"

This is a powerful line.
Step into the unknown...trust me.


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