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Robert William Gruhn
Member

since 2001-11-06

Posts 168
California, USA

0 posted 2001-11-12 06:10 PM

The moon....it danced
In her emerald eyes
As if true love
Had always belonged there

I know I do
No other woman's vision
So willingly captured by
Gently in her gaze

A soft summer breeze
Nearly coming to life
Flowing so very gracefully
Through shining golden hair

Her touch
Soft as a rose
Caressing this man's face
Receiving transfusions of joy

She was an angel
A part of heaven
Sent dearly to me
By God

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2001-11-12 07:00 PM

oh wow....lovely, lovely, lovely....so lucky is she....

Greeneyes~

I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-11-12 08:35 PM

Oh my Sir Robert!
You do pen romance so well.
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-11-12 09:17 PM

(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful! Her eyes reflect the moon, her heart reflects the stars, as will she will always be your loving angel! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, may sweet love forever touch your golden heart! (sigh) I love this, sweet Robert! (sigh) You are a true romantic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet brother, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-11-12 09:31 PM

Sigh . . . very beautiful and touching write, Robert.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2001-11-12 11:12 PM

*sigh* oh yes, your love for her pours like liquid gold from your heart to your pen. Absolutely beautiful.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-11-13 01:12 AM

RobertG~

'Her touch
Soft as a rose
Caressing this man's face
Receiving transfusions of joy

She was an angel
A part of heaven
Sent dearly to me
By God

This is quite lovely~
I enjoyed the read~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

7 posted 2001-11-13 01:32 AM

Robert,

Awwww... that was my first reaction! I love poetry that turns me to mush...lol

Very sweet.. I like

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

8 posted 2001-11-14 11:42 AM

Sir Robert,
We could all use transfusions of joy! Nice write again Robert.

Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either. larry c

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

9 posted 2001-11-14 02:29 PM

Oh, this works for me very well...a lovely read...thank you!

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

10 posted 2001-11-15 12:13 PM

very nice...

~Connie~

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