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ctowen
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0 posted 2001-11-13 12:03 PM


Dawn

As murmur of early morning grows loud,
the small creatures of the night cease to prowl.
Then slowly disappears behind a cloud,
the Lover's Moon, silent and swift to bow.
The powder grey clouds begin to dispurse
over valleys, mountains, into the skies.
You, my dove, fly high with a thriving thirst
passionately above me where love lies.
As our wind picks up in speed and in sound,
twisting and turning like a helping hand,
it carries sun's rays from lost horizons found,
the newborn, through the air, over the land.
For the rebirth of our burning desires,
each dawn feeding our all consuming fires.

[This message has been edited by ctowen (edited 11-13-2001).]

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Greeneyes
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1 posted 2001-11-13 12:21 PM


For the rebirth of our burning desires,
each dawn feeding our all consuming fires"


Passion indeed.... lovely emotion, and thoughts...


Greeneyes~


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I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
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2 posted 2001-11-13 12:38 PM


Absolutely beautiful! The dawn brings a chance for new beginnings, to rebirth goodness, and bring hope.

     I really like this.
Can I keep it?

ctowen
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3 posted 2001-11-13 12:53 PM


Greeneyes   -  deep thoughts deserve deep passion.

Midnitesun  -  Thank you, it is here for all to share.

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4 posted 2001-11-13 09:36 AM


Beautiful, peaceful and passionate at once.
Sandra

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