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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-11-11 05:12 PM


A Pretty Woman

As she went walking by
she caught my eye
like a pretty woman
walking down the street.

She stopped and
looked into my eyes
and I immediately realized
she was the kind of woman
I'd love to meet.

From that moment
I started to believe
that she was the only
woman I'd ever need.

In pretty woman land
the truth can be
awfully sweet.

JamesLee
November11
2001
Love
you
Jin



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Startime
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1 posted 2001-11-11 05:17 PM


Yes, it can indeed. This is a little beauty, James. Very well done. I bet you caught her eye too.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2001-11-11 05:25 PM




(big hugggssssss) Soooooo beautiful, sweet James! (sigh) Maybe someday I will find a way to pretty woman land, and find one that will love me. (sigh) Your loving heart always shines in your romantic words! Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-11-11 05:30 PM



What a wonderful dedication...

The Rusty Knight
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4 posted 2001-11-11 05:42 PM


Good one James.  Have you ever noticed that the more tender a women holds our heart the prettier she is?

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Wanda
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5 posted 2001-11-11 05:49 PM


I thoroughly enjoyed this little poem.  I have a feeling that lady is quite taken with you.  Wanda
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6 posted 2001-11-11 06:28 PM


A pretty woman needs a handsome man like you!
nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2001-11-11 06:49 PM


sweet James..and I liked the Rusty Knights response *s

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

Enchantress
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8 posted 2001-11-11 06:56 PM


Good one James....
I like Rusty Knight's response as well. *S*
I enjoy your style of writing.
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Irish Rose
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9 posted 2001-11-11 08:51 PM


how sweet of you to write a poem dedicated to me  
no, seriously, I love it!

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"
also wrote as The Lady of Shallot
"be true to yourself"

Kit McCallum
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10 posted 2001-11-11 08:55 PM


Ah James ... a wonderful tribute to your "pretty woman" indeed, much enjoyed your sentiments.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Lone Wolf
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11 posted 2001-11-11 09:08 PM


Lovely as always, James.    

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Tracey
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12 posted 2001-11-11 09:26 PM


Ahh, ain't love grand. You sound so happy these days James. It's so nice to see

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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13 posted 2001-11-11 10:09 PM


James,

   I love seeing you happy It's wonderful to see. I enjoyed.

   And I have to say.. I liked Rusty's reply too


Hugs,
Tara

JamesMichael
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14 posted 2001-11-13 12:51 PM


Thank you Startime, Noah, Sunshine, Rusty Knight, Wanda, Rose Petal, nakdthoughts, Nancy, Irish Rose, Kit, Lone Wolf and rosepetals 25 for reading and the wonderful responses...
Yes Rusty Knight there are many beautiful women in this world but in my eyes she is definately the most beautiful woman in this world and my thoughts are definately influenced by her tenderness towards me...James

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