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Open Poetry #16

Things You Don't Know

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

0 posted 2001-11-12 11:19 PM

Deep like a river flowing into the sea
That's the way I feel when you look at me
Beautiful, sensous, and so inspired
You make my heart burn with desire
Tranquil, serenity, and all of these things
Are just a few emotions that you bring to me

Even though I'm not the prettiest woman in the world
You make my head and heart spin like a little schoolgirl
Just a small touch makes me boil
And with your love my heart is now soiled
Your words bring me a calming sense of peace
Your cologne I spray on my fleece

Thank you for the small things you don't know you share
Thank you for loving and showing you care
For through you I have felt like a woman in every way
And in this place I will forever stay.

Peaches

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-11-12 11:41 PM

Peaches...very loving and romantic. Enjoyed!
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2001-11-12 11:43 PM

Stay in that place, peaches! It's where you belong... your own personal comfort zone

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

3 posted 2001-11-13 02:48 AM

This was a good read!!!!!!

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

4 posted 2001-11-14 10:58 PM

Enchantress:Thanks I'm trying to make my poetry more happy.Some days are better than others.

Midnitesun:Thanks,I'm really trying.

WindWalker:Thanks,glad you enjoyed it.
Peaches

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