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Startime
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0 posted 2001-11-12 09:38 AM


EMBRACE LOVE

EMBRACE LOVE
Open
your eyes
see my smile
know my thoughts

EMBRACE LOVE
Open
your arms
pull me close
feel warmth flow

EMBRACE LOVE
Open
your lips
taste my kiss
share your fire

EMBRACE LOVE
Open
your heart
embrace love
dreams fulfilled

Karen Torbiak 2001©



Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

© Copyright 2001 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2001-11-12 11:11 AM


Karen...your passion flows with each word you
give to us....Warms the hearts of many who
you have given such deep love and romance.
Enjoyed this...much.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2001-11-12 11:21 AM




(big hugggsssss) Soooooo beautiful, sweet Karen! (smiles) May your heart be embraced by the most beautiful love you could ever dream of! (kiss on cheek) I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet star, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Abigaile
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3 posted 2001-11-12 11:23 AM


Very sweet. *BIG HUGS*

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-11-12 03:04 PM


"Open your lips"  I can feel the passion flowing...James
Corinne
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5 posted 2001-11-12 04:31 PM


Beautifully written, Karen!

Corinne

Jaime Fradera
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6 posted 2001-11-12 08:59 PM


O, Karen.  Know that I have set my screen reader to a female voice, and that as I hear your words I also feel the chords of both your body and your sowl in Braille,  for you are both fantasy and real.
Love from Jaime...
and I just love you new page

Lone Wolf
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7 posted 2001-11-12 09:32 PM


This one speaks volumes, Karen.  Great work!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Enchantress
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8 posted 2001-11-12 09:36 PM


Beautiful Karen!  As always!
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

walker
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9 posted 2001-11-12 10:25 PM


Just beautiful.
cottage
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10 posted 2001-11-13 04:45 AM


what an open embrace!

~ cottage

Kit McCallum
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11 posted 2001-11-13 06:08 AM


Wonderful sentiments Karen ... a tender and beautiful read indeed, much enjoyed your format and words in this lovely piece!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Jaime Fradera
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12 posted 2001-11-13 08:52 PM


:--------)!!!!!
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