Open Poetry #16 |
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shadows of days |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA ![]() |
open light radiates from a flowing sun ray into a closed room of existence filling the soft corners with an interplay of the shadows of days and the dust of years swirling and shimmering slowly like diamond flecks of memory, my hand passes through them with quiet reflection the light continues to glow outside, and inside, I smile ----------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such gentle reflection in your words. It was a pleasure to be there while you smile at the memories the day brought. I loved the feel of this poem, Sven. There was such a gentleness in it that I just sat here for a minute and let myself feel it. *sigh* BRAVO!!! ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 11-11-2001).] |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sven, I love this ![]() ![]() Hugs, Tara |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssss) The beauty of memories fills your loving words, sweet John! (sigh) Your words are always so touching and wonderful to read, I love them! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet Sven! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet John, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sven, I love this! The way it gently moves down the page and dances in front of my eyes. You KNOW I just love the presentation as well as the words. Enjoyed this tonight. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh* Beautiful! Glad to know you're smiling if this is your reflection, Sweetness! ![]() Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sven, presenting this poem in the shape of a ray of sunlight is brilliant.(pun intended) Your words always shine light on whatever subject you choose to write. Thank you. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful Sven! Wonderful phrasing throughout this tender and expressive piece. I really enjoyed this! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
words which reflect such peace...enjoyed this very much...Now I can sleep well tonite. |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
your words have such a peace to them....this is excellent, and given from such a gifted hand.... ![]() Lauren~ ***** I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-12-2001).] |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, very soft and flowing. Enjoyed lots. Sandra |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
When we can find something to smile about then life is good...James |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
soft and beautiful... ~Tier |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
and I'd smile too ![]() At this lovely tender piece written by you where the sun rays play and sing of the way..... ![]() Lovely Sven.... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you everyone. . . ![]() just been noticing the sun these past days. . . and the shadows. . . thanks for looking with me. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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