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Carnal Quiver
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Carnal Quiver |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Carnal Quiver... In a warm dance of candlelight, the gentle flicker of the flame lends a tickling to fantasy Closing her eyes, she finds the flame engaging her desires in tender sensation Her longing, drifting through moments of sweet caress and roaming kisses, stirs a carnal quiver which captures her defenseless arousal… Upon opening her eyes, she takes his hand and draws him…to her own flame. achildsheart 11-12-01 [This message has been edited by A Whisper's Caress (edited 11-12-2001).] |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Intense ... Great imagery you've used, the flame for passion metaphor is fantastic . The fire dancing in the night . Thanks . L.of.L. Tom . 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Got my vote for best way to wake up. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Tom, intense? wow, thats a first, thank you so much. Duncan, I always look forward to your comments. thank you. |
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