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Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2001-11-11 09:25 PM

Iambic pentameter is so overrated

Soft slippers surround her feet,
Sipping brandy peaches sweet,
The stereo plays a song
And she softly sings along.

Candles flicker lack breezes
She has the time she pleases
To sit and sip and ponder
To let her mind go wander.

Red robe hugs her to warming
And there stays till the morning
When gazes with tired eyes,
Greets the bright beaming sun rise.

Another night he’s not there,
He’d write a sonnet if here.

Gloom

[This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (edited 11-11-2001).]

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-11-11 09:37 PM

*sigh* so very sad. My heart felt so bad for her. You write to put tears in my eyes, my friend.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (edited 11-11-2001).]

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2001-11-11 09:42 PM

Startime,
Sorry to fill your eyes,
Just a little exercise in writing,
Sometime I forget how morose I am.
I’d offer you my hankie,
But I can’t figure how to pass it to you.
Thanks for the response.

Gloom

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

3 posted 2001-11-11 09:44 PM

Ah, this is touching. So sad and tender

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2001-11-11 10:31 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Aszard, my heart cries outot this poor girl, and prays that she may hear the radio song of him behind the curtains! (sigh) Such a sad but wonderful sonnet, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2001-11-23 08:40 AM

You could have written this one for me..it is so apropos. ~Sighing at your softness

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

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