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Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

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Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2001-11-11 02:41 PM

the sunlight streams in
touching the depths of my soul
warming me throughout

~~

my weary heart beats
along with the rhythm of
life's pulsing cadence

~~

I hear your echo
reverberating within
the doors of my heart

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

[This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 11-11-2001).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-11-11 02:46 PM

(smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet Jennifer! (smiles) Such perfect senryu to match the beauty of Sunday! (big hugggssssss) I love it! (sigh) Gof Bless You always, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jennifer, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-11-11 02:47 PM

you know I love this

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"
also wrote as The Lady of Shallot
"be true to yourself"

Temptress

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since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2001-11-11 08:06 PM

I don't think I've ever seen you do these. You do wonderfully! What a great new style for you!

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2001-11-11 08:23 PM

Lone wolves cry at night
But clear eyes of truth burn bright
Warming our cold hearts

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-11-11 08:47 PM

Well done Jenn. Enjoyed very much! ~Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

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Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2001-11-11 08:48 PM

Oh my ... these are beautiful Lone Wolf. Very descriptive, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

7 posted 2001-11-11 09:34 PM

These are beautiful. You hear his echo so he must be getting pretty close. I love them. I can feel them and to me that is what poetry is all about.

**hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

8 posted 2001-11-11 09:41 PM

Well done! These are simply marvelous! I could feel each one of these...the sunlight warming my heart...the echo...I loved this very much!
Cindi

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

9 posted 2001-11-11 10:09 PM

Amazes me how much thought can go into so few words. Lovely

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-11-11 10:42 PM

Noah: Thank you much, my friend. It was indeed a lovely Sunday. May God always bless you also.

Kathleen: Oh yes, I sure do.

Temptress: I've done these before, but not often. They just kind of came to me today.

Midnitesun: I have to tell you, I LOVE this reply. Made me smile.

Nancy: Thank you!!

Kit: You can speaks volumes with few words.  It always amazes me when that happens.  Thanks much!

Karen: I hope he's getting close!  You never know I guess.  Just some ponderings I had today.  Yes, poetry is all about feelings and conveying them to the reader.  You hit it right on.  **hugs**

Cindi: I'm glad you can feel them also.  I'm more than happy to share!

Tracey: Me too!  Thank you!